Blue Demon Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 i'm just join YCM today and make a lot of card but i think this card is my best please give any comment and tips so i can make better card. thanks 4 everyone comment and i have added some card. my card maybe you can't read the effect so i added it:this card cannot be normal summoned or set. this card only can be special summoned by tributing 2 Fish-type monster on your side of the field. if you special summon it this way you cannot summon any monster at the rest of the turn. once per turn by discarding 1 card from your hand to graveyard special summon 1 "Prehistoric Fish Token" (Fish-type/Water/level 3/ATK 1000/Def 0). if this card is sent to graveyard except by result of battle special summon 2 "Prehistoric Fish Token" to your side of the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gregoryman Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 Awsom Card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 -OCG errors: Normal Summoned or SetSpecial SummonedFish-TypeGraveyard OCG needs improvment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue Demon Posted September 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 umm..... what is OCG? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ohgodwhy! Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 Not to bad for a first attempt. Ocg errors though like:Start sentences with capital letters.These words also start with capitals: Normal SummonedSetSpecial SummonedGraveyard If you Special Summon it this way, you cannot Normal Summon or Set on that turn.Not to sure about ocg with tokens so i'll let someone else correct that. Those are all the mistakes that I can help you correct. ocg is the effect to put it very basically. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue Demon Posted September 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 thanks.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 OCG stands for Official Card Grammar, and there is a thread on it. About the card, the picture is cool, but it doesn't fit right into the space on the card. The OCG errors have been mentioned, and the effect is pretty good. just work on spelling and capatilization and you'll be fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexanort Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 nice i LOVE shark. there are great although there is some OCG error. anyway great!. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stormex Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 1st card is good. Like the effect. Pic could be better. OCG errors. Good first card. 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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