Dr.Pain Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 [align=center]Wings of the rising Sun Wings of the Rising sun is a equip spell card that increases the attack of one of your monsters alittle, and cannot be targeted with other cards on the field. It also gains counters every turn to activate some special effects to help you turn the tide of battle. Art Like all meh other cards, the artist is in the bottom right corner of the card. The Card Effect: [spoiler=Effect]The equipped monster gains 300 ATK and cannot be targetted by attacks or effects while you control another face-up monster. Add 1 Spell Counter to this card during each of your Standby Phases. During your Main Phase, you can remove 3 Spell Counters from this card to gain 1500 Life Points. You can remove 4 Spell Counters from this card to select 1 face-up monster on the field. The selected monster cannot be destroyed by battle until the end of the turn. Note: You May... Rate on a scale of x/10 or x/5 Give Constructive critizm OCG grammar errors Thank you![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 -OCG errors: Spell Counter Life PointsStandby Phase Maybe decrease it to 1000 instead of 1500? Just my opinion. Well, overall, nice card with minor OCG errors. Spire's Rating: 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyson Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 OCG errors are quite abundant on this card. "The equipped monster gains 300 ATK and cannot be targetted by attacks or effects while you control another face-up monster. Add 1 Spell Counter to this card during each of your Standby Phases. [instead of "Every turn"] During your Main Phase, you can remove 3 Spell Counters from this card to gain 1500 Life Points. You can remove 4 Spell Counters from this card to select 1 face-up monster on the field. The selected monster cannot be destroyed by battle." I think this is what you're looking for. This gives a lot of benefits to your field. I like the idea. 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Pain Posted September 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 Okies, thx for the coments, editing card now EDIT: its EDITed (lol) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 OCG is right, Pic is alright but maybe a bit bland, effect is ok but I think it should be 1000 Life Points gained rather than 1500, but is still balanced none the less. Card Rating: 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Pain Posted September 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 Thx for the comments! I'm thinking about if it should be 1500 or 1000 though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 A well designed card.8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 No OCG errors, the LP should be 1000, just my opinion though. Love how the effect is really positive... nice pic btw. 8.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Digital.Simplicity. Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 Not bad card is not bad i like the pic 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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