thunderfang12 Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Here it is If this card destroys a monster by battle activate one of the following effects based on the destroyed monsters Attribute.FIRE: During your next Battle Phase increase this cards ATK by 400.WATER: Destroy this card.WIND: Your opponent must discard 1 card from their hand.EARTH: For the next 2 turns double this cards DEF.LIGHT: Destroy 1 card on your side of the field.DARK: Destroy 1 card on the opponents side of the field. Personally I think I did rather well but thats for you to decide. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spiff! Posted September 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 nice card,man.not a fan of effects like that,but it's good.slightly OP'd,actually.if you destroy a DARK monster,you get another one of those guys from the deck.DNA Transplant says hi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thunderfang12 Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Oh OK i will change it (if Thats OK) EDIT: changed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted September 22, 2008 Report Share Posted September 22, 2008 here's my entry hopefully its worthy of atleast 3rd place thanks. When this card is Tribute Summoned, pay 2000 Life Points to activate 1 of the following effects:- Once per turn you can negate the attack of a monster that would destroy this card.- Flip a coin and call Heads or Tails. If you call it right, inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. If you call it wrong, destroy this card.- While this card is face-up on your side of the field, you can pay 1000 life points to copy the ATK and DEF of a monster on your opponent's side of the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spiff! Posted September 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2008 nice card, i liek the recoulour,you get bonus points for that.but the effect is slightly wrong:you should have "...you can pay 2000..."and where it says"- While this card is face-up on your side of the field, you can pay 1000 life points to copy the ATK and DEF of a monster on your opponent's side of the field."it should say"-You can pay 1000 Life Points to select 1 monster your opponent controls.This card's ATK and DEF become the same as the ATK and DEF of the selected monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
火 Neiller 火 Posted September 22, 2008 Report Share Posted September 22, 2008 ill join here is the card Effect:Once per turn, you can discard 2 cards to activate 1 of the following effects: Destroy 1 monster on opponent's side of the field.Increase the ATK of this card by 500.Return 1 Spell or Trap Card to its owners hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spiff! Posted September 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2008 good card,but the effect is slightly wrong:it should say this:Once per turn, you can discard 2 cards to activate one of the following effects:-Destroy 1 monster your opponent controls.-Increase the ATK of this card by 500.-Return 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field to it's owner's hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
火 Neiller 火 Posted September 22, 2008 Report Share Posted September 22, 2008 ok ill fix it____________________________________________________________________________here u go Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexanort Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 i enter [spoiler=Card Effect]This card swicth to defense position after attacking. If this card is in Face Up defense position at your end phase, inflict 400 damage to your opponent life point . If this card is destroyed when in Face Up defense position with a monster whose ATK is lower than this card ATK take control of the monster that destroy this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KuroKibo Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 Here's my card:[spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 Machine-Type monsters on your side of the field. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points, you can activate 1 of the following effects:*You can pay a multiple of 1000 Life Points to destroy 1 monster your opponent's control equal to or below the payed Life Points.*You can discard one random card from your opponent's hand.*You can remove from play a multiple of cards from your top of the Deck to inflict Damage equal to the cards that have been removed from play by this effect x100. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spiff! Posted September 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 @lightdiversion:If this card attacks, is switched to Defence Position after damage calculation. If this card is in Face-up Defence Position during your End Phase, inflict 400 points of damage to your opponent Life Points. If this card is destroyed while in Face-up Defence Position with a monster whose ATK is lower than this card's ATK, take control of the monster that destroyed this card. and Robotic:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 Machine-Type monsters on your side of the field. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points, you can activate 1 of the following effects:*Pay Life Points in multiples of 1000 to destroy 1 monster your opponent controls whose ATK is equal to or lower than the amount of Life Points you paid.*Discard one random card from your opponent's hand.*Remove from play a number of cards from your top of the Deck to inflict Damage equal to the number of cards that have been removed from play by this effect x100. thats some OCG fixes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ICEBURG Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 I guess I'll enter.....I've got nothing better to do...EffectWhen card is summoned, pay life points equal to half it's attack and activate one of the following effects. This is not optional:1-Remove a monster your opponet controls from play. If this effect is chosen, this monster is removed from play three turns after it is summoned.2-Raise this monster's attack by half of it's original attack. If this effect is chosen, this monster cannot attack the turn it is summoned.3-The attack of this card is halved. If this effect is chosen, this monster can attack twice in one turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spiff! Posted September 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 ocg help: When this card is summoned, pay Life Points equal to half its ATK and activate one of the following effects:-Remove a monster on your opponent's side of the field from play. If this effect is activated, this monster is removed from play during your third Standby Phase after it is Summoned.-increase this card's ATK by half of it's original attack. If this effect is activated, this monster cannot attack during the turn it is summoned.-The attack of this card is halved. If this effect is activated, this monster can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Basherbelding Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 Count me in. RESERVED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KuroKibo Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 Machine-Type monsters on your side of the field. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points' date=' you can activate 1 of the following effects:*Pay Life Points in multiples of 1000 to destroy 1 monster your opponent controls whose ATK is equal to or lower than the amount of Life Points you paid.*Discard one random card from your opponent's hand.*Remove from play a number of cards from your top of the Deck to inflict Damage equal to the number of cards that have been removed from play by this effect x100.[/quote']Ah, thanks, The Almighty Animator. I don't know the 'whose' word lately ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Basherbelding Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 Robotic, what do you think of my card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Hunter™ Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 Why are you asking Robotic if Almighty Animator fixed the OCG of his card? :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Basherbelding Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 Oh yea, lol. Then what do you think of my card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Hunter™ Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 *Steals the job of The Almighty Animator* lol.There are some OCG Errors, heres a fix:Increase the ATK of this card for every Machine-Type on the field x250. Hope These Help ^ ^ ^ :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Basherbelding Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 Ok thanks, i'm not going to edit as i believe that it should be as originally no edits lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spiff! Posted September 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 actually,i think it should say:Increase the ATK of this card by 250 for each Machine-Type monster on the field. and,uh,change the Att. to something other than Divine.please? and you are the last entrant.i shall begin judging.rubric:out of 102 for effect2 for originality2 for balance2 for name2 bonus points for certain things,i.e. helpfulness during contest. i shall judge in reverse order basherbelding:Necro-mechname:1effect:1originality:1balance:1bonus:2, for being happy with his card,and deciding to go against the odds and risk losing on ocg,which im not rating on,for obvious reasons.total:6/10 i cant see the rest of the pics,so ill rate when i can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thunderfang12 Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 Hay i can't see pictures either Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Hunter™ Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 I can see mine.*looks at the other cards*lol, I can't see it too, I guess this contest doesn't end today :(. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thunderfang12 Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 ohh i can see mine nowyay^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spiff! Posted September 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 ICEBURG:Name:2Effect:1.5Originality:2Balance:1.5Bonus:1 - only FIRE monsterTotal:8/10 Robotic234Name:1.5Effect:2Originality:1 - common effect typeBalance:1.5Bonus:0Total:6/10 lightdiversionName:2 - i like it!Effect:2Originality:2Balance:1Bonus:1 - inventive effect,fits the name well.Total:8 nieller2Name:1.5 - nicely done.Effect:2 - well done.Originality:1 - common effect typeBalance:2 - very well balancedBonus:1 - extremely well done cardTotal:7.5 Darklotus397Name:1.5Effect:1.5 - slightly Overpowered.Originality:2 - great colouringBalance:1 - underpowered.Bonus:2 - great work on the image.Total:8 thunderfang12Name:2 - very creativeEffect:2 - common effect type,but very well executed as you have limited control over itOriginality:1.5 - effect.look at it.Balance:2 - flawless Balance,a great mixture of positive and negative effects.Bonus:1 - great card in all categoriesTotal:8.5 - we may have a winner here! Silent HunterName:1.5 - long,but that's not necessary.im not a fan of long names.Effect:1 - long,but creative.however,you switched between Token names,making it confusing.Originality:2 - very creative effect,one of the few non-list effects.Balance:2 - very well balanced.a masterpiece.go work for Konami and sort them out.Bonus:2 - great holo,making an already good picture even greater.Total:8.5 - a rival for Thunderfang? HiyaName:2 - very creative,one of few.Effect:1.5 - very good effect,but affects cards i know nought of.Originality:2 - great picwork,and a creative WATER monster.Balance:1.5 - great balance,though easy to summon and very powerful in the right position.Bonus:2 - almost flawless,if i were to see that as part of a set,i'd instantly +repTotal:9 - a new Challenger Appears! Nelsn3Name:2 - well,i like it.i can just picture myself saying "i summon Infected Cyborg", lol.Effect:2 - short and sweet.i like that in a card.a handy effect in SS and LS,actually.Originality:1.5- one of a small group of 1-tribs in this contest.innovative effect.Balance:2 - very well balanced.with 2200 AK,that help balance it more with it's refill effect.Bonus:1 - a 1 trib realistic monster.Total:8.5 - a very nice card indeed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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