KOXPureHeartedXKO Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 Now This is my First attempt out an E-HERO so Pleasse don't be mad at me for any small Thing anywaysImage Credit: ~jotade22 On Deviantarti will add effect if requested This card has Changed accordingly by: Dark Edo Phenoix and Kale Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 remember to cap words like: Normal Summoned.Special Summoned. Warrior and Reptile are Types. not Attributes. 'Warrior-Type' and 'Reptile-Type" reptiles arent used much, so it isnt very awesome of an effect... and the OCG is off... just a bit. ;) and the effect is somewhat bland and overpowered. 7/10 good try. ;) ~K Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KOXPureHeartedXKO Posted September 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 Ty Kale! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 Ty Kale! your welcome. :) i have a request: could you shrink your sig down a bit on the sides? it messes with the forum layout... anywho, good cards may start arising from you... keep at it. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KOXPureHeartedXKO Posted September 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 Alright sure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2wsx Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 ive seen worse Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 That's a great effort, I like thefact that you have a long effect. I'd just like to tell you a few things to help improve it so that you can edit your card accordingly and use this stuff for future cards. ;) See that logo in the bottom right corner of the picture? You might want to crop the picture so that the logo isn't visible, logos aren't good for realism, which is your goal here. Your official card grammar is good, but you made a few small errors, nothing serious, you might wanna go over them though. Here's an OCG suggestion. =P This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 3 Warrior-Type monsters you control. When this card is Special Summoned, all face-up Reptile-Type monsters on the field lose 1000 ATK and DEF. When this card attacks, toss a coin. -Heads: Your opponent randomly discards 2 cards. -Tails: You take 1000 damage. Another thing, leave circulation blank. LIMITED EDITION only works if you have a gold sticker on the corner of the card, otherwise it's unrealistic. So ya might wanna change that. =P Realistic set IDs have 4 letters in their first part, and in the second part you put EN and then 3-digits making a number between 001 and 250. Fix the above and it's a SUPER hero! Feel free to PM me if you have any questions or concerns. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asterr259 Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 pretty good, 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KOXPureHeartedXKO Posted September 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Wow kool I thought it'd be worst..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matteron Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Pretty Goodepic fail/10no just kidding 7/10:lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
narutofan655 Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 i think its op and need swork but i give you a 3/10no i am kidding 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Underpowered.______________________________________________ Tributing 3 monsters to summon a 6 star monster. Reptiles losing 1000 ATK and DEF would be almost improbable since reptiles are very seldomly used. The heads/tails effect doesn't really help. 1000 damage to your life points is a lot. Having your opponent only discarding 2 cards in your hand doesn't do much good._________________________________________________________________________ Pic = Space Ghost_________________________________________________________________________ 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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