znick55 Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 my first cards.... like them?i will make more soon if you do Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A●O●J Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 the ocg isn't too bad.the first card's pic is over used though.even though theres like dragon cards posted every minute,this was pretty good for ur first try. Rating:5.5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asterr259 Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 Not bad, Not bad, but needs a little ocg work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TGTwtfDXD Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 i agree wit the above Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
znick55 Posted September 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 well im new and not to good at ocg do u see anything in perticular that i need to change? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 Could be better, the pictures aren't great, as mentioned the OCG/grammar needs work, and try to spruce-up the effects a bit. also on the first card, take out the part that says it can turn invisible. summoned = Summoned water = WATERin battle = by battle three = 3 your side of the field = your field life points = Life Points sacrifice = tribute 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
znick55 Posted September 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 Could be better' date=' the pictures aren't great, as mentioned the OCG/grammar needs work, and try to spruce-up the effects a bit. also on the first card, take out the part that says it can turn invisible. summoned = Summoned water = WATERin battle = by battle three = 3 your side of the field = your field life points = Life Points sacrifice = tribute 6/10[/quote'] ty that is what i wanted someone to say i will work on better one right away Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 Before I comment about the OCG... well... I don't wanna point anything out. But OK OCG. The pics are OK, not the best I have seen. Effects and balancness are pretty good. One is overpowered. The first one. 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 Not bad for your first. Before you post more, you should read the RULES for this Forum. Also, you may find the OCG / Grammar Thread helpful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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