Jayde_child Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 Hey guys. I'm getting the hang of making cards so heres my third one. Rate it it or tell me if you think its overpowered or something like that. k thanks ^_^ When this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, Special Summon 2 "Soul Tokens" (Spellcaster-Type/Dark/Level 1/ATK 300/DEF 300) in Attack Position. These Tokens battle position cannot be changed and cannot be used as a Tribute for a Tribute Summon. When a "Soul Token" is destroyed by battle, your opponent randomly discards 1 card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TGTwtfDXD Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 nice card for a n00b but its still nice, the pic is kinda weird though so ill give u a 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 Not bad, I don't really like the picture, the effect is good, and the OCG/grammar seems alright. here are some fixes though: as a result of battle = by battle Dark = DARK "tokens battke position" = token's battle positions 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 I like the pic, unlike everyone else. Some OCG errors, not too many. Way UNDERPOWERED. Give it some more attack. =P 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jayde_child Posted September 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Not bad' date=' I don't really like the picture, the effect is good, and the OCG/grammar seems alright. here are some fixes though: as a result of battle = by battle Dark = DARK "tokens battke position" = token's battle positions 7.5/10[/quote'] What?! when did i ever put "battke"? and i guess i can agree with you about the other OCG errors but "as a result of battle" is still correct form of OCG its just different generation of OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Nice pic.Cool name.Errors already stated.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Not bad' date=' I don't really like the picture, the effect is good, and the OCG/grammar seems alright. here are some fixes though: as a result of battle = by battle Dark = DARK "tokens battke position" = token's battle positions 7.5/10[/quote'] What?! when did i ever put "battke"? and i guess i can agree with you about the other OCG errors but "as a result of battle" is still correct form of OCG its just different generation of OCG. "battke" was a typing mistake by me. I was trying to get at the aposrophe in "tokens". Sorry for the missunderstanding. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frlf Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Not bad' date=' I don't really like the picture, the effect is good, and the OCG/grammar seems alright. here are some fixes though: as a result of battle = by battle Dark = DARK "tokens battke position" = token's battle positions 7.5/10[/quote'] Thats kinda all. Good work pal :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 OCG: When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 2 "Soul Tokens" (Spellcaster-Type/Dark/Level 1/ATK 300/DEF 300) in Attack Position. The Tokens' battle position cannot be changed and cannot be used as a Tribute for a Tribute Summon. When a "Soul Token" is destroyed by battle, your opponent randomly discards 1 card. Pic is alright, but a bit bland, and effect seems ok but boring and unimaginative. However it can be effective if you need to perform a Synchro Summon (since it doesn't prevent from you from Synchro Summoning with them). Card Rating: 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackyboy294 Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 not very good 2.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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