Sucka369 Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 These toke long to make Enjoy reading them, i also have sora and riku coming in another pack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sigma Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Cards need backgrounds,no subtypes please,and,OCG(Original Card Grammar)needs work4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sucka369 Posted September 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 what you mean by no subtypes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sigma Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 what i mean by no subtypes is like no "Orginization XII",but something like "Warrior" or "Pyro" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sucka369 Posted September 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 ok i get it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sigma Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 good,and ask some poeple if they could get some backgrounds for your card,and work on your OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zepher2211 Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Um i have a question about your ansem card.1.why did you use an ansem pic that is a heartless not org.xiii lol the real ansem was never seen as a heartless anyway you should have used the name Xemnas because that was the name of him.Also the pic you used is of Xehanorts heartless and it's name is not really ansem.(ps:he just masqaraided his name as "ansem") ima leave an attachment to the picture of Xemnas ok ill try not to leave any more attachments ty for being helpful!oh also you could try to add the 14th member of the 13 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sigma Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 eh,don't leave attachments please,send him a PM of the pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Effects aren't that great. Need better images. Overpowering... 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sucka369 Posted September 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 thanks zepher2211 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larxene Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 *throws up* Okay, now that I'm done with that, your OCG/grammar seriously fail Don't use fake types Terrible pics Ansem isn't a member of Organization XIII Overpowered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 clariex took the words right out of my mouth^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sucka369 Posted September 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 ok this is my first time and my first cards i made so why dont you message me things you like it if you dont like it dont tell me, if you think i can do better then make your own cards based on Org. 13 and i am not a geek on kingdom hearts. I thought i would get preaty good comments but look at this "WORST CARDS" "HORRIBLE PICS" if you say nice cards but if you just change this or that that will be O.K i will change it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larxene Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 I told you what I found wrong with them Now you can improve them =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sucka369 Posted September 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 then say nicely not saying *throws up* Okay, now that I'm done with that, your OCG/grammar seriously fail Don't use fake types Terrible pics Ansem isn't a member of Organization XIII Overpowered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larxene Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 I don't have to tell what's wrong in a nice way, as long as I actually tell you ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sucka369 Posted September 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 o really then ok i know what happen no go annoy some one else i am tired of you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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