Sunstar Mage - Holo

[Spiff!]

well,i might not have Made the holo,but i paid for it and i LOVE it.

1 Spellcaster Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters.

When this card is Synchro Summoned,you can place 1 Sunstar Counter on this card for each monster used in the Synchro Summon of this card.This card gains 300 ATK for each Stunstar Counter on it.You may remove 1 Sunstar Counter from this card to negate the attack of your one of your opponent's monsters.

 

what do you think?

which is better?

[Silent Hunter™]

Nice card, but there are some OCG Errors. Heres a Fix ^_^

Card:

1 Spellcaster Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters.

When this card is Synchro Summoned, you can place 1 Sunstar Counter on this card for each monster used in the Synchro Summon of this card. This card gains 300 ATK for each Stunstar Counter on it. You can remove 1 Sunstar Counter from this card to negate the attack of 1 monster your opponent controls.

always put a space after " ., ", "may" is outdated use "can" instead, if you say "your one..." that won't make any sense, when you say numbers say it as a number like "1, 2, 3..."

 

About Card:

I like the concept of the card

The pic is not bad, the holo is good

Its balanced

But there are some OCG errors

OVERALL: 8.8/10 Good Job ^_^

[Spiff!]

cool.i posted this card a while back,and i recently got it holoed,so i thought it was worth a repost.thanks for the rating.i ahve another monster id like holoed,and im getting it done i think,by the bucket 90.he holoed this one.

[ohgodwhy!]

I think for this card, I prefer the one without the holo. Silent Hunter already fixed the ocg so with that updated it'll be like a proper card.

[Exiro]

Very, very nice card.

 

I like the name, art effect, but maybe lower his atk by 100.

 

Also, the left one is better.

 

9,873/10

[Spire]

Good card.

 

-The pic is nice.

 

-OCG errors:

 

may=can

 

-It's slightly overpowered in my opinion (Just). Maybe lower it's ATK, a little, or lowere the 300 to 100. Just my opinion.

 

Overall, good card, nicely done.

[ShootingTheMoon]

im 9-years old

[Spire]

im 9-years old

 

That=Spam=Neg!

 

Oh, I forgot to rate:

 

Spire's Rating: 9.2/10.

 

I hope to see more from you.

[Matteron]

im 9-years old

Ahh! spammer run

but nice card 9/10

But anyhow run!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its a spammer:lol:

[.Digital.Simplicity.]

Nice card and nice holo like the pic ocg's not bad 8/10.

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Left card > Right card

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Possibly overpowered if you're using quite a few monsters for the summon.

8/10

[Spiff!]

indubitably.

i like the effect as is.it gets less and less LolATK each time you use her effect.she'd usually start with 3000-3300,then decrease as you use her effect.

 

but maybe if i lowered it to 200,that would be 28-3000,enugh to take out DaD.