Pyrotechnet Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 I decided to make another card like Twilight Hourglass. So comment/ rate/ whatever floats your boat and as always, enjoy! [spoiler=Effect]This card only be activated after it has been set for 2 turns. When you activate this card, remove it from play. During your Standby Phase, place 1 "Twilight Counter" on this card. During any of your Standby Phases, remove all counters from this card. Activate the appropriate following effect for the number of counters removed and send this card to the Graveyard:-1 Counter: Draw 1 card-2 Counters: Increase your Life Points by 300 for every card in your hand-3 Counters: Return 1 card on the field to the owner's hand-4 Counters: Discard 1 Monster, Spell, or Trap card from your hand. Add 1 card of the same kind as the 1 discarded from your deck to your hand-5 or More counters: Select 1 card in your Graveyard or that's removed from play and place it on the top of your deck Picture from Photobucket Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 If you look at the effect of Divine Dragon Excelion, you will find that cards with multiple effects, just like this card doesn't have "Jumps". If you don't follow me, as i am sure you don't, here's an example: Divine Dragon Excelion's Effect:When this card is Normal Summoned, it gets 1 of the following effects for each "Divine Dragon - Excelion" in your Graveyard when this effect resolves (your choice). These effects cannot accumulate. ● This card gains 1000 ATK. ● If this card destroys your opponent's monster by battle, it can attack once again in a row. ● When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster. If you do understand, then that's good for your future card making. The effect of the card which activates when it has 4 counters are OP, as you can discard a useless card from your hand to get whatever is better. If you know Gold Sarchofagus, you'll see what i mean. It is limited to 1. (Or i least think it was some time ago) and when you activate that card, you have to wait for 2 turns before getting the card. The pic is a little blurry. A. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 OCG is good, except for a couple of things:1 - you don't need to put Twilight Counter in brackets anymore (but you can if you wish).2 - Deck is capped, not deck.3 - you return cards from removed from play to your Grave, not send (unless it says send on an already existing card).4 - it's "During your Standby Phase", not "During any of your Standby Phases" However it is a bit confusing when this effect is used, are the counters only put on this card when this card is removed from play by it's own effect, or just when it's removed from play? becuase if it's the latter, then this card's first effect becomes pointless (when used in a proper Deck). < answered Pic is nice, not connected to Twilight though really. Effect is alright but is slightly OP, since while this card is removed from play, your opponent cannot stop counters going on this card since there is no card that affects counters going on a RFP card. So then in 4 turns (which is easily stallable for), you can discard a useless card to get a better one. Card Rating: 6/10 - OP is OP and isn't tolerated, but is not as OP as it could first appear to be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pyrotechnet Posted September 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Its effect only activates when it is removed from play by its own effect. Also, you'd actually have to wait 6 turns to get the card from your deck because it has to be set face down for 2 turns before you can activate it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 every = each deck = Deck "Twilight Counter" = Twilight Counter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyfi Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 I Like this card but you do have a few OCG errors, images is not of my taste I will garde this 11.86/13.69 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 i like it 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bunter Dwayne Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Pic is cool, effect a bit strange, but very original. 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pyrotechnet Posted September 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2008 Thank you all who rated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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