Alister Grey Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 I wish to be an actual card designer. I will post my work frequently and will accept any feedback that I can get. Please enjoy and rate my designs, if you have any questions feel free to send me a PM. Thank you. Now for my first design. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Digital.Simplicity. Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Nice card like the pic 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Pic is alright not great, but really has nothing to do with time does it? OCG seems ok, but:1 - it's Deck, not deck2 - you don't need to use the work respective in the card effect3 - owner's, not owners.4 - I think it should be "...Deck. Then all players draw 3 cards from their Decks". Effect is ok but Synchro Summoning for an almost complete reset of the game (no Life Point change or removed from play cards returned), that's just a bit too iffy for me. Card Rating: 6/10 - it's not a bad idea, but not something I can really bank on. No offence Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
king7586 Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 no atk and def i dont get it 5/10 the rest is good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alister Grey Posted September 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Pic is alright not great' date=' but really has nothing to do with time does it? OCG seems ok, but:1 - it's Deck, not deck2 - you don't need to use the work respective in the card effect3 - owner's, not owners.4 - I think it should be "...Deck. Then all players draw 3 cards from their Decks". Effect is ok but Synchro Summoning for an almost complete reset of the game (no Life Point change), that's just a bit too iffy for me. Card Rating: 6/10 - it's not a bad idea, but not something I can really bank on. No offence[/quote'] None taken. I appreciate the feedback, and if I was trying to avoid criticism I wouldn't have posted my work.no atk and def i dont get it 5/10 the rest is good It doesnt require attack and defense because as soon as it is summoned it returns to the Extra Deck. It would be rather pointless, in my opinion, to give a card attack and defense points if it cannot attack or defend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 no atk and def i dont get it 5/10 the rest is good The moment it is Synchro Summoned, you return every card in your Grave, hand and field to the Deck, so this card goes back to the Extra Deck. So even if it has 0 ATK and DEF, it wouldn't matter since it's effect would clear the field anyway (except if Skill Drain is active, then this card is useless). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scorchgid Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 which makes this card balanced Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alister Grey Posted September 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 And now for my next trick.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Second CardOCG: When this card deals Battle Damage to your opponent, you select and discard 1 card from your opponent's hand. Pic is alright, maybe a little dark. Effect is alright, but a little too simplistic and basic. Card Rating: 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alister Grey Posted September 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Second CardOCG: When this card deals Battle Damage to your opponent' date=' you select and discard 1 card from your opponent's hand. Pic is alright, maybe a little dark. Effect is alright, but a little too simplistic and basic. Card Rating: 6.5/10[/quote'] Pic was emailed to me by a friend. And if all my effects were complicated, I wouldnt have anything to fall back on for the simple folk, after all, even I need some simplicity in life. And, just a friendly request, could you please not note on the grammer of the text, I appreciate that you are trying to help, but these are prototypes, I will edit and finalize them later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 OCG is a little rough but i agree that the first cards pic doesn't have anything to do with time but also the second should be lightened a little but thats up to you love both cards though 7/10 nice effort, also if you want you can send me your second one and ill lighten it for ya if you want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Chaos Timelord: graveyard = Graveyard deck = Deck_______________________ Vice Dragon: creature = card or monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bunter Dwayne Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 OCG is off, needs capitals in places. Good effect, nice pic, 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alister Grey Posted September 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 One of my favorites. Enjoy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nubcakez Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 Chao Timelord: 6/10, this card is okay, it is a good card to mess up ur opponent's strategy sometimes but in general, not a card i would use.Vice Dragon: a type of cards i like, like a hand destruction version of vortex kong...except a bit strong, picture 8/10Singularity Field: yea i see why u use this picture, but u could probably find a pic that has better representation... as for the effect, a bit vague..control means like u can only atk once per battle phrase or u can only have 1 monster on ur side of the field... 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alister Grey Posted September 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 Chao Timelord: 6/10' date=' this card is okay, it is a good card to mess up ur opponent's strategy sometimes but in general, not a card i would use.Vice Dragon: a type of cards i like, like a hand destruction version of vortex kong...except a bit strong, picture 8/10Singularity Field: yea i see why u use this picture, but u could probably find a pic that has better representation... as for the effect, a bit vague..control means like u can only atk once per battle phrase or u can only have 1 monster on ur side of the field... 6/10[/quote'] In regards to Singularity Field, the effect means that both players can only have one monster on the field at a time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 Nice card man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alister Grey Posted September 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 Nice card man! Which one??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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