romanandre Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 This is the first card I ever made.Just a simple card to fit in a deck I might work on. Edited with the help of comments bellow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atlasindle Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Nifty effect. Keep at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 When this card is Tributed to Tribute Summon a Level 7 or higher monster, destroy 1 monster on the field. ^OCG fix^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exiro Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Bad ocg.The effect is something that has been done so many times, but better. The name and art are nice, though. 6,13/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 I don't think you have to put the actual word effect in the text. Overall a couple ocg errors as stated but overall good for a rookie 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 bad ocg bad card fail/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i am L Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 better luck nxt time/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Trust me, you're already miles ahead of some new members... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
romanandre Posted September 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Thanks for all the tips guys, I'm going to work to improve my cards, I don't have yu-gioh cards so i try to create some effects but not sure how to put em down. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Demon = Fiend summon = Summon enemy monster on the field = monster your opponent controls Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshfetter Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 cool succubus, f'n good pic, check out my succubus deck I made, it's about 48 down in the completes catagory,as of today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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