Brawler_1337 Posted September 22, 2008 Report Share Posted September 22, 2008 Why "technically?" I try to make all of my cards realistic with realistic text. This is my first card that really has nothing to do with any pop culture... something I see as a requirement for this board. Well, here it is. Image URL: http://purgatory33.tripod.com/sitebuildercontent/sitebuilderpictures/.pond/dragon.jpg.w300h333.jpg (Not sure if that's enough for pic credit) Notes:-I could not use bullets for the multiple effects. I don't know if I have (the Apple equivalent of) Microsoft Paint, and I don't have Photoshop on my username. I decided to settle with dashes.-If you find it hard to read the text (although it looks fine to me), just tell me and I'll post the effect separately. Rate/specify improvements, if you want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted September 22, 2008 Report Share Posted September 22, 2008 A bit overpowered, considering the effects. Solid pic and no OCG errors. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 22, 2008 Report Share Posted September 22, 2008 I don't like squinting. Effect outside plz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brawler_1337 Posted September 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2008 Can do. Each turn, during your Main Phase 1, you may remove from play 1 DARK monster from your Graveyard to activate one of the following effects:-Decrease the ATK of this card by 500 points until the end of this turn. This card can now attack twice in one Battle Phase.-Look at one face-down Spell or Trap Card. If it is a Trap Card, send it to the Graveyard immediately. If not, return it to its original position. Yeah, it is a bit overpowered. Each turn, during your Main Phase 1, you may remove from play 1 DARK monster from your Graveyard to activate one of the following effects:-Decrease the ATK of this card by 500 points until the end of this turn. This card can now attack twice in one Battle Phase.-Look at one face-down Spell or Trap Card. If it is a Trap Card, send it to the Graveyard immediately. If not, return it to its original position. If this effect is used, skip Battle Phase. That looks a little better... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 22, 2008 Report Share Posted September 22, 2008 Nah..it's alright. 1 instead of one though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brawler_1337 Posted September 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2008 Okay. Done. Text is really small, though Each turn, during your Main Phase 1, you may remove from play one DARK monster from your Graveyard to activate one of the following effects:-Decrease the ATK of this card by 500 points until the end of this turn. This card can now attack twice in one Battle Phase.-Look at one face-down Spell or Trap Card. If it is a Trap Card, send it to the Graveyard immediately. If not, return it to its original position. If this effect is used, this card cannot attack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted September 22, 2008 Report Share Posted September 22, 2008 Not bad for your first Realistic, 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted September 22, 2008 Report Share Posted September 22, 2008 This is a good card. It has good balance and good OCG. Image is perfect. Great job. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brawler_1337 Posted September 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2008 Thanks! I was expecting lukewarm reviews. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted September 22, 2008 Report Share Posted September 22, 2008 OCG: Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1, you may remove 1 DARK monster from your Graveyard from play to activate 1 of the following effects:-Decrease this card's ATK by 500 until the End Phase of this turn. This card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase.-Look at 1 face-down Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's field. If it is a Trap Card, send it to the Graveyard immediately. If not, return it to its original position. If this effect is used, this card cannot attack. Pic is alright, but bland and overused. Effect is alright, not really OP and when used correctly very dangerous. Card Rating: 7/10 - OCG is a bit of an issue, and general feeling about the card (no offence). P.S. Now about the bullet-points, you don't need Photoshop or anything like that to use them, you could just copy and paste them from another card into the effect box when making the card. The Yugioh Wikia is a good place to go, just bring up the page of a card with bullet points on it (such as Rainbow Dragon), then copy the bullet point from the effect box and paste it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brawler_1337 Posted September 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 I was told that, but I didn't try it. I'm working on that right now.Finished editing. The bullet thing didn't work. That's why I settled with the dashes. I'll fix that later. Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1, you may remove 1 DARK monster from your Graveyard from play to activate 1 of the following effects:● Decrease this card's ATK by 500 until the End Phase of this turn. This card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase.● Look at 1 face-down Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's field. If it is a Trap Card, send it to the Graveyard immediately. If not, return it to its original position. If this effect is used, this card cannot attack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frlf Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 Pic is overused.OCG is a bit off. but use StevenBray's correction.I don't like it a lot tough :?.Good job tough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brawler_1337 Posted September 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 Did that. Used bullets, too, but the damn Card Maker doesn't accept bullets... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 may = can take out "now" in the 2nd listed effect overused pic. :neutral: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brawler_1337 Posted September 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Will make that correction. (bump in disguise) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nubcakez Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 i would make it return to its owner's hand instead of sending it to graveyard, but it is just my opinion.. yea i recognized that picture lol seen it many times, but fits ur card name :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Not bad, as mentioned the picture is overused and not that great. Otherwise the OCG/grammar is great, and the card seemed balanced fairly well. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brawler_1337 Posted September 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 may = can take out "now" in the 2nd listed effect overused pic. :neutral:I didn't use "now" in my edited card. I do not think you have read the entire page... It doesn't look much different' date=' but it has been edited. [i']Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1, you can remove 1 DARK monster from your Graveyard from play to activate 1 of the following effects:● Decrease this card's ATK by 500 until the End Phase of this turn. This card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase.● Look at 1 face-down Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's field. If it is a Trap Card, send it to the Graveyard immediately. If not, return it to its original position. If this effect is used, this card cannot attack.[/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drakeon Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 very common image not very creative Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brawler_1337 Posted September 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 So it's bad based only on the image? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XDRangePureX Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 I make all my own imagesSo they suck :( Yeah, that pic is overused =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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