Bluephoenix Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 I haven't posted a card for the longest time, so I wanted to start up again. Don't expect anything truely special out of this one, but I just wanna know how badly I'm rusting and what to improve on. I don't own the image,etc. rate,Comment, verbally destroy, just reply. 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen a Beast-Warrior-Type monster you control is destroyed by a card effect and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 "Monkey Soul Token" (Beast-Warrior-Type/EARTH/3 Stars/ATK 500/ DEF 500) in Attack Position on field. While this card is face-up on the field in Attack Position, you can remove 2 "Monkey Soul Tokens" on your field to Special Summon 1 "Gorilla Soul Token" (Beast-Warrior-Type/EARTH/4 Stars/ATK 1800/DEF 1200) in Attack Position on your side of the field. When a "Monkey Soul Token" is destroyed as a result of battle, decrease this card's ATK by 200. If a "Gorilla Soul Token" is destroyed as a result of battle, decrease this card's ATK by 300.When this card is removed from the field or flipped face-down, destroy all "Monkey Soul Tokens" or "Gorilla Soul Tokens" on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 Your side of the field = Your field as a result of battle = by battle -remember to capatilize Summon and Special Summon -must put "Type" after you say "Beast-Warrior" = "Beast-Warrior-Type" As for the rest of the card it is pretty good, I like the picture, I mentioned the OCG, and the effect is nice. Not bad for a first card in a long time. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CardTimeNow Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 The picture is nice, and the effect is well balanced. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluephoenix Posted September 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 oh man I forgot to cap Special Summon and put the Type in,I can't believe I missed that.Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 No problem. You fix the errors and my rate is 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluephoenix Posted September 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 yup,all fixed,thanks again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 Destroyed as a result of battle, seems good. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluephoenix Posted September 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 ok I new it was destroyed as a result of battle,then someone told me to change it,so I did,and now I find out I was right,life is weird. thanks for the 9/10 Cobra Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 may = can________________ Pic looks a TAD blurred. Unique effect 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Pretty good idea. Balance is good. Recommended changes have been listed. I like this. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluephoenix Posted September 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Thanks for the rates guys. DeMeNTeD- The pics blurry because he's standing in a fog, it was like that before, but I can understnd how it would look blurry. I'll make the changes now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluephoenix Posted September 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 great pic, I know little of synchros so I can't help you out effect wise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pauliestern Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 Very nice..you're gonna need to make many more cards to warm up, though..(9/10) lets aim for that 10/10 eh? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluephoenix Posted September 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 I'm hoping for the 10/10 with my other card I posted,but thanks for the good rates and comments guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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