Bluephoenix Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Ok so I wanted to go with that Gaurdian Veil kinda technique with this card effect. I was gunna make it more aggresive, but I do destroying cards alot.I'm pretty sure I forgot to capitalize something or messed up on something stupid like that, so please inform me if you find anything. PLEASE RATE or at least comment on what I can fix. All criticism is appreciated. I don't own the pic and all that good stuff. You can remove this face-up card on your side of the field from play. If you do this, all WATER monsters on your side of the field cannot be selected as an attack target during your opponent's next Battle Phase. On the 3rd turn after this effect was activated, you can Special Summon this card to your side of the field in face-up Attack Position. If so, this card is treated as a Normal monster with an ATK and DEF of 1500. This card's card effect is negated after the 3rd turn after activation. If a WATER monster on your side of the field is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by a Spell, Trap, or Monster card effect while this card is removed from play by it's card effect, you can not Special Summon this card during the 3rd turn after this card's effect is activated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Change ATK to 2600, DEF to 2400, good pic, can, not may, good effect. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluephoenix Posted September 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 thanks,I'll change it now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coinsu Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 it has a good pic and all that but the effect is not the great (6/10) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frlf Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Pic is not THAT great, but its good :D.Effect is not that great also, but its good :P Good work pal :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluephoenix Posted September 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Thanks Frlf, I know it's not great, I wasn't aiming for "Oh MY GOD" quality but to know it's good is enough. coinsu- ya obviously missed the point of this card. make a high rated card then come back and say it's not great. thanks for the rate though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coinsu Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 ok i get it now that is a good Effect 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSJ3Goku Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 A bit overpowered. Lets you get many cards out onto the field with a water deck or one strong monster. You could also be able to attack your opponent. I say make the effect so that all water monsters on your side of the field cannot be selected as an attack target during your opponents next turn, not the next three turns. Make his ATK 2300 and his DEF 2700. You'll want his DEF like that to swarm easier and if placed in face down defence mode, has a chance of inflicting damage to your opponent because they wont know how much DEF it has. Picture is a bit squished so get that fixed. ATM, you have a 8.5/10 but when you get all that done you will have a 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluephoenix Posted September 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 I'll definately do that when I get home later today thanks. coinsu-thanks alot man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSJ3Goku Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 Thanks. That'll make a good card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluephoenix Posted September 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 ok I edited the card,the pic I can't fix so if it looks a little squished well that's the best I can do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSJ3Goku Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 Now its awesome bah a few OCG errors. I'll fix them up. You can remove this face-up card on your side of the field from play. If so, all WATER monsters on your side of the field cannot be selected as an attack target during your opponent's next Battle Phase. On the 3rd turn after this effect was activated, you can Special Summon this card to your side of the field in face-up Attack Position. If so, this card is treated as a Normal monster with an ATK and DEF of 1500. This card's card effect is negated after the 3rd turn after activation. If a WATER monster on your side of the field is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by a Spell, Trap, or Monster card effect while this card is removed from play by it's card effect, you can not Special Summon this card during the 3rd turn after this card's effect is activated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluephoenix Posted September 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 all fixed,thanks for the help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coinsu Posted September 27, 2008 Report Share Posted September 27, 2008 your welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted September 27, 2008 Report Share Posted September 27, 2008 If so = If you do this_______________________ Not bad. Nice pic. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the bucket 90 Posted September 27, 2008 Report Share Posted September 27, 2008 Cool picNice effect 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluephoenix Posted September 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 Thanks for the rates. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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