Bengal Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 I played around a little bit with this picture too, let me know what you think. Also, let me know if I have forgotten any types in the effect, although I'm not incuding types like physcic and divine. White Sage - Herald of the Rebirth Effect: You can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon this card from your hand. When a monster you control is sent to the Graveyard by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls, activate 1 of the following effects, based on the Type of the sent monster: -Fairy: Add the sent monster to your hand and inflict 500 damage to your opponent. -Beast, Beast-Warrior, or Winged Beast: You gain 100 Life Points for every Level 6 or higher monster in your Graveyard. -Warrior, Machine, or Thunder: Remove from play 1 Spell or Trap Card you control to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. -Aqua, Plant, Reptile, or Fish: Draw 1 card and reveal it. If the revealed card is a Spell or Trap Card, discard it. -Dinosaur, Rock, or Dragon: Add 1 Field Spell Card from your Deck to your hand. You must activate it this turn if possible. -Fiend, Spellcaster, or Zombie: Remove 1 Level 4 or lower DARK monster in your Graveyard from play. -Sea Serpent, Insect, or Pyro: Discard 1 card. Your opponent skips their next Draw Phase. -Psycic: Look at the top card of your opponent's Deck. If the card is a Spell or Trap Card, pay 500 Life Points to add it to your hand OR send it to the Graveyard. Please comment and rate! *Art credit on the card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NineteenHundred Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Cool card. I think the ATK is low enough to make it a level 5, but that`s just my opinion. Good job and keep up the good card-making. :) 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustavosuarez Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 interesting effect and good card. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 You can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon this card from your hand. When a monster you control is sent to the Graveyard by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls, activate 1 of the following effects, based on the Type of the sent monster: -Fairy: Add the sent monster to your hand and inflict 500 damage to your opponent. -Beast, Beast-Warrior, or Winged Beast: You gain 100 Life Points for every Level 6 or higher monster in your Graveyard. -Warrior, Machine, or Thunder: Remove from play 1 Spell or Trap Card you control to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. -Aqua, Plant, Reptile, or Fish: Draw 1 card and reveal it. If the revealed card is a Spell or Trap Card, discard it. -Dinosaur, Rock, or Dragon: Add 1 Field Spell Card from your Deck to your hand. You must activate it this turn if possible. -Fiend, Spellcaster, or Zombie: Remove 1 Level 4 or lower DARK monster in your Graveyard from play. -Sea Serpent, Insect, or Pyro: Discard 1 card. Your opponent skips their next Draw Phase. OCG fix above. One thing, though: you're missing Psychic. And it is a legal type, so you need to include it. Maybe make the effect so that it activates whenever a monster you control is sent to the Graveyard, regardless of how? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 ^ What tectonix said, only it's Winged Beast (no hyphen) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 ^ What tectonix said' date=' only it's Winged Beast (no hyphen)[/quote'] I need to remember that. Fix'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Thanks for the comments and rates, tectonix, I have fixed the OCG with OMGAKITTY's help, I appreciate the help. (I edited the written out effect, too lazy to edit the card right now) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 -Psychic: Look at the top card of your opponent's Deck. If the card is a Spell or Trap Card, pay 500 Life Points to add it to your hand OR send it to the Graveyard. Fix'd the last part. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nubcakez Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 wow wheel of fortune lol, cuttie effect, and hot picture. when i read the first effect, i though u were gonna list the effect one by one, i was like woah.. anyway, good work 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Thanks for the rate, and yeah I was thinking of doing each type 1 by 1, but then I decided to group them becasue it would be easier for me ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brawler_1337 Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Cool pic, pretty good OCG (though "... your opponent's Deck, if..." should be "... your opponent's Deck. If..."), very interesting effect. This is a card that would be quite useful. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Thanks Brawler for the rate and the fix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NineteenHundred Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Card`s even better with the new Psychic addition. 9.2/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Card`s even better with the new Psychic addition. 9.2/10. I was delighted with your first rate, thanks for this one :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Good pic, nice effect, maybe up the ATK a bit.8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Thanks DeMeNTeD, (a.k.a. bump) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Or, good pic, change ATK to 2400, psychic. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Or' date=' good pic, change ATK to 2400, psychic. 7/10[/quote'] Thanks for the rate cobra. I have to disagree with raising the ATK to 2400 though, that would be a little to much don't you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 You still didn't make my fixes for the Psychic effect... :X Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 O sorry, when I looked at the effect and your fix before, they looked the same. Just realized the changes you had made now. Thanks again (+rep for all the help with OCG) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CeDeFiA Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Real good. Tectonix fix'd it all, so 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 9/10 Nothing major wrong, cool pic, but a bit fuzzy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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