PrimalFear Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Check out the Preview into my FanFic in which this deck is based on the main character: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-71852.html All artist credit goes to Deviantart Here is the list of Hayate's deck my main character in my new FanFic: Extra Deck: 3) 3) Main Deck: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 The cards look ok, the pictures a decent, the effects seem alright and the OCG/grammar could use some work. Some errors I saw at a glance: graveyard = Graveyard LP = Life Points flip Summon = Flip Summonstandby phase = Standby Phase opponents = opponent's 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted September 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 thank you i do know some OCG's but haven't managed to fix them yet you should look at my FanFic and let me know what ya think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nubcakez Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 at a glance, the card that stands out most to me is armored cord ONI, excellent back ground in combo with halo. and it is the coolest looking of all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted September 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 thanks alot i appreciate it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brawler_1337 Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 "Flip" should be all capitals. Not bad, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted September 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 thanks brawler Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brawler_1337 Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Your welcome. ... However, "Armored Core" is the name of a video game. COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT!!! jk. I'm sure it was just a coincidence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 You seem to have too many Tuners to non-Tuners. Try to adjust that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted September 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 will do i'll figure it out soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
black99kid Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Nice cards i'll have to read the FanFic but i spot some OCG errors all and all 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted September 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 thanks black99kid can't wait to see what ya think of my story thanks again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted September 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
black99kid Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 Hey i've got some ideas about another dek for your fanFic if you want it just PM me and let me know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∮.Ғσяgσттeи.SσℓÐιєя.∮ Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 okay,heres my grading scale:Grammar:kinda bad(2/5)Pics:great!(4/5)Realism:OK(3/6)Overall "look" of cards:good(3/4)Fairness:pretty good(7/10)Corectness or spelling:Good(6/10)Scale of which people would like this in thier deck:pretty good(7/10)34/50OK!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted September 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 thanks you should also check out my preview of my FanFic thanks for the comments though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the bucket 90 Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 Mehish holoSome ocg errorsCool backgrounds 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted September 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 thanks i appreciate it make shure you also check out my FanFic which this deck is based on Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamief Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 Good! If you like, i have an awesome image that i made, that you could use if you like :P PM me if you are interested Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted September 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 thanks for the comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackyboy294 Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 darklotus, your cards are great but in my thread plz dont report me in ANY reasons OK? oh, i almost forgot 9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted September 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 thnx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted September 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zane1988 Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 love the card idea and the Fanfic but i see some OCG problems and a couple might be overpowered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted September 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2008 thanks zane Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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