bozotehpwns Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 So i met this chic at my school. Shes pretty hott and today in first period she came into my mind and i wrote a story down. It's kinda weird but i felt like i should share it whether y'all like it or not doesn't bother me: [spoiler= bozos cruddy story(purrty long)]Vampirical Absess *Ring**Ring* The bell to let the classes out rang. He had been staring at her intensely for the past 10 minutes, completely ignoring the instructors' comments about sin cosine and tangent! “Might as well be now” he thought to himself. He pulled a piece of gum from his pocket and through it in his mouth. The room instantly filled with a cool minty scent. Luckily she always stayed by the wall for at least 30 seconds between classes to talk to friends. “I think I've got pink eye!” he heard as he neared. He was standing right in front of her within a few steps. Even though she was only a couple of inches shorter than him she felt so far away. He breathed slowly into her face making sure she turned to face him. She was smiling for half a second before she realized how close he was to her. “Le...” is all she could get out before he kissed her. Her breath left her and she almost fell over, he wasn't quite sure if he did it right until her lips were cold. The life left her eyes for only a moment. Content with himself he walked to his next class. The whole time he walked he couldn't stop thinking about her. The gum had worked though and he was sure he had drained enough life force to at least survive another day. That night he sat pondering weather or not to kiss her again. Even though he needed to siphon life from her, he couldn't help but smile as he remembered how good it felt. “Leigh WAKE UP!!!” He stood upright in his bed. “I'm already awake” he grumbled back. Had it all been a dream? He thought to himself. It couldn't be, he was still alive after all, but for how long? What if the pain came back again? He looked at the gum on his desk “You gonna miss the bus!!” the voice sounded again. “Yeah I'm goin” he said as he pocketed the gum on the way out. It wasn't until second period that his hand started hurting again. “To bad I've only got one of these” he said to himself while he switched the bracer to the aching hand. I really need to stop talking to myself he though. Perhaps I'm suffering from d illusions, from dying so many times. “I've gotta kiss her again” he said aloud. With that comment the entire class turned to face him, but he was to fast for them and was busy writing notes again, oblivious to their looks. Math class rolled around, and he found himself being somewhat nervous for the first time in a long time. He sat in his seat and began to pull his things out. Then, she walked in the door completely avoiding eye contact, and wearing an awfully heavy coat. “The gum is getting to her” he said aloud, “But I've gotta kiss her again” this time in a low whisper. Realizing he was talking to himself again he silently scolded himself and went back to gathering his things. When the lunch bell rang he headed to the library as usual, but couldn't concentrate. Every time he turned the page her face intruded his thoughts. Seeing that no reading could be accomplished, he walked out of the library, bought a drink and went back to class. Throughout the rest of the period he noticed her stealing glances at him. The bell rang again and it hit him. She was wearing the coat because she had anticipated another kiss! He followed her closely and popped a piece of gum in his mouth, she turned around as the scent filled the air and he took his chance to steal a kiss. They held the lock for much longer than last time, and it was her who broke away. She stared down and exhaled..You could see her breath, smiling she looked up gave him a hug and walked away. He couldn't concentrate for the rest of his classes that day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Metal Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 ZOMGZZZ long story. Mushy lovey story. Made mah insides hurt.....good job :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bozotehpwns Posted September 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 woot...i didn't want it to be too mushy tho :( meh it doesn't matter i was thinking of making a book out of it that being a part in maybe the middle? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Metal Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 woot...i didn't want it to be too mushy tho :( meh it doesn't matter i was thinking of making a book out of it that being a part in maybe the middle? Go for it. Whats the worst that could happen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bozotehpwns Posted September 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 Main idea: Kid finds gum, gum gives eternal life, catch - basically vampire :P needs sum yummy life force to survive gum helps with the siphoning Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 Wow, that was a pretty good, new age style of a romance fic. ^_^ I liked it. It wasn't too mushy, it was just how guys think. ;) Good job, my friend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bozotehpwns Posted September 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 sweeet thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSJ3Goku Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 Nice story, but why is it called Vampirical Absess? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bozotehpwns Posted September 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 Absess meaning Tooth absess im thinking he finds the gum looking for some pain relief in his tooth after havin an absess taken out and the gum makes him into a variation of a vampire Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSJ3Goku Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 Oh. Now I get it. I wasnt sure about the Vampire part. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bozotehpwns Posted September 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 Right well basically he gets eternal life but he needs some sort of "life" intake so he siphons the life from people...like vampires ingest blood...he would literally just take the life from somebody with a smexy ass kiss :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSJ3Goku Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 Awesome idea :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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