Careless Whisper Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 Bfore I begin, I would lik for all of you to know that my intention in this poem is not suicidal, but to show you what it is like, the emotions I feel in the presense of something with so much influence, that it take over and I am tempted by the mass of social beliefs. PLease, do not take this poem as a symbole that I am depressed and mentally suicidal, I wrote this poem for your enjoyment and to wonder your minds with the art that I find the most breathe taking, and constructive. Through my SightThrough my Sight [align=center]Through my sight,Only silence.Through the silence,Only sorrow. Through the sorrow,Comes the dawn.When dawn fades,I am gone. Through eternity,I'll lay at rest.At rest, I'll see your light.Only your light, and nothing more. Through my sight,Lays only gore.For only the Raven,will say "Nevermore."[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 :( And the song I was listening to didnt help much either lolGreat and all... But missing that extra punch ya? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Metal Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 ZOMGZZZZ the poem has the word "gore" in it. You do love me :D Anyways nice peom its very nice I thought. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 It's great man. cept... "Through eternity,I'll lay at rest.At rest, I'll see your light.Only your light, and nothing more" For some reason, that just doesn't work for me. It just doesn't sound right... Anyway, good poem. Though, dark...but I like dark! xD (Marilyn Manson = best ever to me, so um...thats a small hint :P) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 For only the Raven,will say "Nevermore."you nearly confused me there with 'Raven' XDbut awesome poem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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