logan2001 Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 i think this has no problems i hope not Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marksmanaim Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 ok... I sugest you take a little time making your cards, It improves quality 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steven Cope Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 You should put an 'and' in between sentences 2 and 3.Also destroyed not destoryed. Besides that, good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
logan2001 Posted September 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 i can't spell to save my life Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Legend Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 uhhh... not bad 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.