Endgame Gladiator

[Windowlicker]

A day ago I posted this card and didnt get any comments so I posted it again. This is my 1st card:

 

 

Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 3 monsters. Once per turn, select one monster on your opponent's side of the field and decrease its ATK by 100. When this card is destroyed, by paying 1000 Life Points, destroy one card on your opponent's side of the field.

[jabura86]

interesting eff.. but change the type in warrior /effect simple, and its level to 8

rewrite the eff in: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 3 Warrior-Type monsters on your side of the field. Once per turn, select 1 monster your opponent controls; decrease its ATK by 100 points until the End Phase of the turn. When this card is destroyed, by paying 1000 Life Points, destroy 1 card on your opponent's side of the field.

also remember the artist credits :)

8/10

[«₣lџχ»]

Mak it a Level 8 or higher monster

 

Effect proper ocg:

This can only be Advance Summoned by releasing 3 monsters you control. Once per turn, decrease the ATK of 1 monster your opponent controls by 100 Points. When this card is destroyed, you can pay 1000 Life Points to destroy 1 monster your opponent controls.

 

Make the effect a bit more creative, its a bit simple and give image credit.

 

It's a nice card for a newbie, must say way better than my first card ;) 7.8/10

[Wyhe]

you don't need to put endgame after the type (it's not a subtype)

[MILSS]

Pretty good for a newbie. You need to work on your OCG, however. 7/10