CrazeeFool Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 i just created this i am a noob so if i am making a mistake point it outthanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesus Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 The fact that you made a normal monster is spam. 2/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazeeFool Posted September 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 WHAT!? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesus Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 Normal monsters are looked down upon. Effect Monsters > Normal Monsters. The fact that you posted a normal monster and not an effect monster makes it spam. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazeeFool Posted September 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 Is this better then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 Normal monsters are looked down upon. Effect Monsters > Normal Monsters. The fact that you posted a normal monster and not an effect monster makes it spam. Give the guy a break... I think the card's fine, but its underpowered, and you don't type |Spellcaster| ever. Yeah, and that's better. Just fix the OCG on that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesus Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 That's a bit better, just make the effect a bit more interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazeeFool Posted September 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 what the OCG? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesus Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 OCG stands for Official Card Grammar. For example, instead of putting "once per turn u can special summon a monster card from ur graveyard", you would put the correct term and that should say "Once per turn, you can Special Summon a Monster Card from your Graveyard." Understand a bit more now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 OCG: If you inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points, you can select and discard 1 random card from their hand. Pic is alright, not bad at all (maybe overused, not sure). Effect is alright, not too imaginative and a bit bland really. This card is still UP. Card Rating: 6/10 - not bad, just underpowered Just one piece of advice, remove the normal monster from the 1st post and post the effect monster in it's place, cause not all people on this forum read all the posts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazeeFool Posted September 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 I hav finished editing the OCG what do you think now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesus Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 It's getting better, in-fact a lot better. You might want to make it a LOT more interesting though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazeeFool Posted September 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 How? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesus Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 Just go crazy with it, although make sure it's not overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 Okay, it seems you need help. I'll fix it completely for you: Each time Direct Damage is inflicted to your opponent's Life Points, destroy 1 face-down Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's side of the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazeeFool Posted September 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 newly improved and bad to the bone Mwahaha! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nubcakez Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 change the Lft in ur first sentence to Lifei would make the atk a bit lower tho if u have that effect of gaining 500 LP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 Oponent's = opponent's Life Points may = can their = his/her Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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