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[align=center]I make card, you rate, not that hard.

 

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This card can only be activated when your opponent activates a Spell or Trap Card that destroys a monster. Both players select a monster whose level is equal to or less than the target monster from their decks and place it on their 1st open Spell & Trap Card Zone. During your Main Phase 2 move the monsters clockwise as their respective Level. If the card would be placed in a Spell and Trap Card Zone that is already taken, Special Summon the card in their respective owner's field. If the card is Level 8 or higher, the card loses 500 ATK.

 

 

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[align=center]If you're going to rate the card, please provide why you give that rating, if you do not do so, I'll make your life impossible.

I know the OCG is off, but idk how the OCG for this style of cards..[/align]

 

DO NOT RATE PIC, IT WAS A PICTURE CONTEST.

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OCG: This card can only be activated when your opponent activates a Spell or Trap Card that destroys a monster. Both players select a monster whose level is equal to or less than the target monster from their decks and place it on their 1st open Spell & Trap Card Zone. During your Main Phase 2 move the monsters clockwise as their respective Level. If the card would be placed in a Spell and Trap Card Zone that is already taken, Special Summon the card in their respective owner's field. If the card is Level 8 or higher, the card loses 500 ATK.

 

Pic is alright, quite abstract and neat. Effect is slightly confusing (had to re-read it once or twice), but all in all a very interesting and innovative effect. No one has thought of this idea before as far as I know, and I made an assumption you meant the monster from your Deck's Level is less than or equal to the target monster's level.

 

Card Rating: 8/10 (iinvation bonus +1) - OCG is a bit of a problem

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Sorry StevenBray, but you missed a spot:

 

"During your Main Phase 2 move the monsters clockwise as their respective Level."

 

should be:

 

"During your Main Phase 2, move the monsters clockwise across a number of spaces equal to their respective Level."

 

You also need to specify whether you want he card to move "clockwise", as in onto the monster card spaces, or loop from the other side, so:

 

"If the card is moved past the 5th Spell & Trap Card Zone, it is placed on the 1st space and continues moving."

 

Also, you need to put right after the "1st open..." :

 

"If you have no open Spell & Trap Card Zone, it is immediately Special Summoned."

 

Finally, since both player select a monster, the decrease in attack for level 8 or higher is unnecessary.

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