lol my first spell card in my new set

[Madsen]

It is my first card in my new set:

Effect:

This card can only be equipped to a monster with "Knight" in it's name.Increase the ATK of the equipped monster by 400.By sending the equipped monster card to the Graveyard, you can activate 1 of the following effects:

-Select 1 card with "Knight" in it's name from your Deck and add it to your hand.

-Draw 3 cards from your Deck.All cards without "Knight" in it's name are sent to the Graveyard.Add all cards with "Knight" in it's name to your hand.

When 1 of these effects is activated, remove this card from play.

 

Pic by Wolfberserker

[StevenBray]

OCG: This card can only be equipped to a monster with "Knight" in it's name. Increase the ATK of the equipped monster by 400. By sending the equipped monster card to the Graveyard, you can activate 1 of the following effects (when 1 of these effects is activated, remove this card from play):

- Select 1 "Knight" monster from your Deck and add it to your hand.

- Draw 3 cards from your Deck. All non-"Knight" cards are sent to the Graveyard.

 

Explain the changes: 1 - There is always a space after full stops, 2 - there is no need to put the "remove this card from play" effect as it's own line when it sounds just as right in brackets and 3 - when you Draw cards from your Deck, they always go to your hand and then a card's effect judges where they go, so there's no need to say the "Knight" cards are put in your hand.

 

Pic is alright, not that good though (which is one reason why I haven't used it yet). Effect is balanced and useful for most Warrior Decks.

 

Card Rating: 7.5/10

[♫Griffinsusername♫]

you beat me to it. Good card. I like the idea

[Professor Cobra]

Grammar problems, good pic, "Knight" monsters, good effect. 7/10