lt.hawk Posted October 3, 2008 Report Share Posted October 3, 2008 This is my first time making "realistic cards" and my second time post cards that I made. Please let me know what you think and if I need to correct anything."Plaguespreader Zombie" + 1 or more Zombie-Type non-Tuner monstersEach time this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent they select 1 Monster card from their Deck and send it to the Graveyard, If that monster is a Zombie-Type you can Special Summon it to your side of the field from your opponent's Graveyard. Also, Each time when this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by your opponent's card effect, it is Special Summoned to the field during your next Standby Phase with 500 more Attack Points. I'll start off with my favorite card Vampire Lord...let me know if I have the first effect right. I was trying to have it so when "Zombie World" was out you can Special Summon the monster card your opponent sent to the graveyard. I made this card because I hate staller decks it has a strong effect but its attack points would never be too high. Lastly this card is nothing really new but since Zombie World is a key card this card helps you get it to your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustavosuarez Posted October 3, 2008 Report Share Posted October 3, 2008 some OCG errors but good cards. the pics are interesting and the third card is usseful. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lt.hawk Posted October 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2008 Thank gustavosuarez...more comments plz let me know were i can fix anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jericho Posted October 3, 2008 Report Share Posted October 3, 2008 I love the zombie swarm despite there being some OCG errors. Over all rate: 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lt.hawk Posted October 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2008 Thanks CoryDarkstar Zombie Swarm is one of my favorite card that I made. Can you tell me what the OCG errors are so I can fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jericho Posted October 3, 2008 Report Share Posted October 3, 2008 I'm not really sure how to phrase what it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Pain Posted October 3, 2008 Report Share Posted October 3, 2008 I like what you did to the vampire lord Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Hunter™ Posted October 3, 2008 Report Share Posted October 3, 2008 idk know if i really like the 1st pic (Vampire Lord)...There are some minor OCG Errors, but its okPics are goodEffects are good too7.5/10 Not bad ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaca Posted October 3, 2008 Report Share Posted October 3, 2008 1st card:It doesn't seem to have OCG errors.The last line make it OP. Name is ok.Pic is good but overused.8.1/10 2nd card:Some OCG errors, you need an "s" after remains and a "-" between "face" and "up". I'm not sure if "Monsters" has a capital. "Attack Points" should be "ATK". "zombie card" should be "Zombie-Type monster".Not really OP. Just a bit powerful.Name goes with the pic and would work fine as a name.Pic goes with the name. You can't really get anything better than that for the sort of card it is.6.9/10 3rd card:No OCG errors, not that any card would in a short simple effect like that.Perfectly blanced and useful if you had a Zombie Deck with "Zombie World" in.Name is ok, could go a bit better with the pic though.Pic is good for a Zombie card.8.5/10Good cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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