FindingTheEverlight Posted October 3, 2008 Report Share Posted October 3, 2008 Here it is, I'm working on some chords to play this song to. If you feel like reading, please do, it's really long Voids Hey morning bird Bring myself back to the start For you'll bring the end Just once Will you shine for me Show mw what I'm missing Aquitted of the crime I try again No, dont speak tonight Not again --- You got me scared Tight on breathing Sorry, can you feel it? Either deceive or believe Just walk away (I wont even try) Hold me closer and pull me away I will not stay NO, WAKE UP I'm on the other side of bliss I can't care less what happens here Tell me this is over I don't wanna know My heart is racing again Beating twice the normal rate I cant fall asleep (with you scattered all over my mind) Just no more empty faith --- Filled up with nore more faith Never seems to amaze my embrace Centering my "Shoulda" "Coulda" "Woulda" way I cant be called a saint, not deserving Over and over again Can't fight this welcoming disease Your're better than me Let's try again I really miss these feelings That I'll never have again I can remember that --- Redemption (in the eyes of God) When reborn, I'll be in Hell No longer worthy Redemption (in the eyes of my heart) When failed, I'll be in Hell Falling apart I swore it would end But I can't stop Wont stop Leaves of Autumn seem to leave me Again and again Once again Can I please forgive myself After my apology, NO --- Lashing out Speaking loud enough to hear you Dazed within myself Crowded with disease Lashing out, LASHING OUT Crowded with disease Only within me Lashing out, LASHING OUT Disease us forsaken within me Lashing out at you But all I know --- Still so scared Lost within I love you Let me in ________ NOTE: The --- tells the chorus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted October 3, 2008 Report Share Posted October 3, 2008 i don't like it, there are no rhymes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Metal Posted October 3, 2008 Report Share Posted October 3, 2008 i don't like it' date=' there are no rhymes[/quote'] All songs don't have to rhyme....this isn't rap. It has meaning and thats all that counts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FindingTheEverlight Posted October 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2008 Songs don't need to rhyme. The song came from the heart, it's about a girl who deceived me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shrekstasy Posted October 4, 2008 Report Share Posted October 4, 2008 2 Thumbs up... Work on the audio, then I'll rate.You can make a vid on Youtube, that'll work :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Posted October 4, 2008 Report Share Posted October 4, 2008 eniabPanic beak Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted October 4, 2008 Report Share Posted October 4, 2008 eniabPanic beak spamreported beak Nice song Sin. Are you going to make a video? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted October 4, 2008 Report Share Posted October 4, 2008 I like it ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FindingTheEverlight Posted October 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 Sorry for bumping this, but I will have this song performed and available to download on RapidShare, on saturday, I'll have the correct equipment. I'm pretty stoked! I'm trying to memorize it as of now, I'm working the chords G7 and C, and A for the chorus. I have the chorus perfect and I'm changing some lines of the song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Father Wolf Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 its decent but till i hear a beat there just words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FindingTheEverlight Posted October 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2008 OK, I recorded myself playing the song, my voice is awful! My sister's bird is chirping in the backround... The chords were off with the vocals, I still need practice. Oh well here it is: http://rapidshare.com/files/153671066/Voids.mp3.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted October 13, 2008 Report Share Posted October 13, 2008 Can I make the music video? i dont know...I just need something to do.I <3 this song, btw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FindingTheEverlight Posted October 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 Can I make the music video? i dont know...I just need something to do.I <3 this song' date=' btw.[/quote'] Feel free! Make the video as awful as my song... lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 XD Seriouslt, It has great potential as a song. If you need a beat, I could make one. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protoman Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 Nice like swift said get a good beat and ...you know the rest and by that that means make it a good song:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FindingTheEverlight Posted October 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 I know, I'm just learning to play the guitar though. I will make it better, plus I'm working on a new song. It'll be better, I'll make a new thread when I record it though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted October 15, 2008 Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 XD Today, I fell for Hayley Williams. Now it's between JoC, Sin, and I. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FindingTheEverlight Posted October 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 ^ OK, that's spam. But that's cool... you should add a pic of her to your sig But anyway. I am working on a new song and hopefully it's better. I stole the chords from Boulevard of Broken Dreams by Green Day! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted October 15, 2008 Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 Well music seems to be your thing. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FindingTheEverlight Posted October 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 ^ Not really, I'm not much of a singer and I'm new to the guitar. But I guess music is my passion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JesusofChaos™ Posted October 15, 2008 Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 XD Today' date=' I fell for Hayley Williams. Now it's between JoC, Sin, and I.[/quote'] Why enter a battle you cant win Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FindingTheEverlight Posted October 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 XD Today' date=' I fell for Hayley Williams. Now it's between JoC, Sin, and I.[/quote'] Why enter a battle you cant win We already know who'll win... me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JesusofChaos™ Posted October 15, 2008 Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 XD Today' date=' I fell for Hayley Williams. Now it's between JoC, Sin, and I.[/quote'] Why enter a battle you cant win We already know who'll win... me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FindingTheEverlight Posted October 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 XD Today' date=' I fell for Hayley Williams. Now it's between JoC, Sin, and I.[/quote'] Why enter a battle you cant win We already know who'll win... me! Name the place and time, I'll take you on. Bring it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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