OCg. I need help. I think its right, but I have never seen this before.

[Luna Lovegood]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by its own effect. You can send 15 cards from your Deck to your Graveyard to Special Summon this card. You must also Tribute monsters who's Level equals the level of all the monsters in your Graveyard combined. On the turn this card is Special Summoned, you must read this card's entire effect to your opponent. If this card is targeted by the effect of a Spell or Trap who's name starts with a 'F', 'I', 'N', 'A', 'L', 'M', 'O', 'V' or 'E', the effect of that card is negated , and the card is removed from play. Then, this card gains a Counter who's name is the first letter of the Spell or Trap this card destroyed. If this card has Counters who's first letters spell out 'FINALMOVE', this card's ATK is multiplied by the number of cards still in your Graveyard that you sent there to Special Summon this card. On the turn you activate that effect, your opponent cannot activate any Spell or Trap cards and all effects that are active are negated. If this card is destroyed or Tributed by the effect of a card your opponent controls, you may Special Summon this card from the Graveyard with all the Counters on it that it had when it was destroyed or Tributed by the effect of a card your opponent controls.

[Silent Hunter™]

deck = Deck

tribute = Tribute

who's = whose

level = Level

counter = Counter

The effect is kinda confuzing for me but pic is good, there are just some OCG Errors ^

Not sure what the OCG should sound like with those kind of cards, I'll try to think of one :D

[Luna Lovegood]

Thanks. Will fix OCG.

[Frlf]

For me it is underpowered.

If your opponent knows the effect, he won't apply any cards to it.

You can top deck easily with that card, and run out of monsters.

 

WAIT..

And the last sentence makes it OP'ed.

 

I just meh at the card >.>''

[Luna Lovegood]

Um, you actiavte them. Also, 2000 ain't hard to beat.

[Frlf]

You can activate the cards?

Then its just FULLLYY OPed.

Now its worse :D

[Luna Lovegood]

I hatez you know. you beleive its easy to activate 9 cards startting with specific letters without losing a lot of life points?

[Frlf]

You do not need to lose any life points to activate the card

And that makes your opponent to discard the chance to summon a spell / trap card.

 

If you have that card in your deck, you make sure to have a lot of spell cards / trap cards with those letters.

 

Some cards to add spell / trap cards to hand.

 

And if you send to graveyard, 15 monsters, there is more probability to draw spell / trap cards.

[Luna Lovegood]

But then you need to summon him.

[Frlf]

If you summon him you get a monster with 2000 atk.

 

Lets use this card in a duel.

 

''I special summon this monster. I send to graveyard 15 monsters.''

Now you just have.. like.. 19 cards in your deck?

All those may be Spell / Trap cards.

And if that card dies, it is summoned back.

 

So its unstopable.

[Luna Lovegood]

Well, my buble was bursted. My next one is better.

[Frlf]

We may see.. >.

[Guest Welche]

Its ok, 8/10.

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Winged-Beast = Winged Beast

 

may = can

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Nice and original. I think (IDK) the OCG is worded correctly.

8.5/10