Skaj Posted October 4, 2008 Report Share Posted October 4, 2008 I've been with the YCM for about two? months now, I don't remember, anyway, I've been making cards off and on when I have the time. I do all of my own card artwork, I don't like taking other people's art and putting it on something else I do. Uhh, now that's out of the way, here's the first card that I think is one of my favorite pieces and I just wanted to know what everyone else thought about it. CC and if you could point out any OCG errors or anything, it'd be nice. So, what do you think? Edited: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drakeon Posted October 4, 2008 Report Share Posted October 4, 2008 A little over powered, should be super rare at the least, and needs a little more creativity. 7/10. Nice job though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted October 4, 2008 Report Share Posted October 4, 2008 OCG: When this is activated, discard 1 card from your hand. Then select up to 2 monsters on the field and activate 1 of the following effects:> Return both monsters to the owners' hand.> Remove both monsters from play.> Send both monsters to their respective owners' Graveyard. I think that's right OCG anyway. Pic is not so great, actually it's horrid. Effect is alright, but it is a bit OP, since you could just choose 2 monsters on your opponent's field and this card becomes very beneficial for you, and your opponent loses 2 monsters. It would be better if it was "select 1 monster on your side and 1 on your opponent's side". Card Rating: 6/10 - OP is OP, and I don't tolerate it. But since it's not always OP (you could lose 1 monster yourself instead) it could be balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted October 4, 2008 Report Share Posted October 4, 2008 Well, you should fix the size of the bullets. You have some OCG errors with the effects, but I can't think of how to fix it right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skaj Posted October 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2008 Thanks guys! I figured it was a little overpowered, guess I have to change it a bit more. I'll change those bullets, make them a little smaller too. Steven, can I ask why you don't like the picture? It may be a little distorted from it being a jpg, and it had to be resized to fit the card, but.. can I ask why? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted October 4, 2008 Report Share Posted October 4, 2008 Steven' date=' can I ask why you don't like the picture? It may be a little distorted from it being a jpg, and it had to be resized to fit the card, but.. can I ask why?[/quote'] I'm a fan of the abstract pics on cards this is true, but I'm not sure what it is - it seems a bit too weird and distorted for a card image (if that makes any sense at all). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted October 4, 2008 Report Share Posted October 4, 2008 It's opponent's side of the field. You need side of the, and you need the apostrophe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skaj Posted October 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2008 Steven' date=' can I ask why you don't like the picture? It may be a little distorted from it being a jpg, and it had to be resized to fit the card, but.. can I ask why?[/quote'] I'm a fan of the abstract pics on cards this is true, but I'm not sure what it is - it seems a bit too weird and distorted for a card image (if that makes any sense at all). Oh, well when you put it like that, thank you :D.Haha, but seriously, I now know what you are saying, and I do kinda agree with you on that it shouldn't be a card image, seeing how it is a little weird, maybe too gross or something, but still, I like it, so, eh. Thank you though! I edited the card, maybe it'll be a little less overpowered and more reasonable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted March 29, 2009 Report Share Posted March 29, 2009 I would say that the only thing that you would have to do to make it balanced is to make it a Normal Spell card. Other than that, it's great! ~Fuzzie's TIPS~ -Save your card as a PNG, and then upload it; it will have better quality (but you would have to start all over again with the bullet points). -Great pic, but try making it as large as possible (but not too large) so when you save it as a JPEG and it makes it looks pixelated, it will look better when uploaded into your card. Anyhow, great card. Keep 'em coming! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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