monem Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 Card description : When this card is Tribute Summoned ,you can send from your deck to the Graveyard a number of cards equal to the number of cards that your opponent have in the field,and inflict 500 of direct dammage to your opponent's Life Points for each card you send to the Graveyard. i find picture here :http://www.seanellery.com/gallery/albums/userpics/trex.jpg Plz tell me if the card is overpowered . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 I'm not good at fixing OCG errors personally, but I would most certainly change it to this: When this card is Tribute Summoned, you can send a number of cards from the top of your Deck to the Graveyard equal to the number of cards that your opponent controls and inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each card sent to the Graveyard. I know it's not perfect, but maybe you can PM someone for some help... And 'rex' (in name) should be 'Rex'.'dinosaur' should be 'Dinosaur'. Although it being Dinosaur or whatever, it has nothing to do with the effect, it's not too bad...Keep it up. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 Not bad, the picture is good, and the effect is too, I don't think it is too overpowered. As for the OCG, deck = Deck I would stick with 01alim's fix for now. Try coming up with a more creative name though, it is not very original. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ITI3L33 Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 Change the name. It ain't good. And there are some OCG errors. Listen to 01alim's version 'til tetraslash or someone like that sees this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wolfblood Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 I hate the name and dont make up ur own types never works.........3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K.B. strategist Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 ^Dinosaur is one of the 20 original types. Deck The rest of the errors have already been corrected by others so... 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mathu Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 i think you should make it a synchro monster and call it synchrosaurus rex lol, but really pretty good card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monem Posted October 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 I'm not good at fixing OCG errors personally' date=' but I would most certainly change it to this: When this card is Tribute Summoned, you can send a number of cards from the top of your Deck to the Graveyard equal to the number of cards that your opponent controls and inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each card sent to the Graveyard. I know it's not perfect, but maybe you can PM someone for some help... And 'rex' (in name) should be 'Rex'.'dinosaur' should be 'Dinosaur'. Although it being Dinosaur or whatever, it has nothing to do with the effect, it's not too bad...Keep it up. ^_^[/quote'] Thanx for help . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 have on the field, Deck, damage. I would raise it's level since it was like a dinosaur king above all others, but that's me. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 "...and deal damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the number of cards discarded x500." You spelled ancient wrong.Lame name.meh pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monem Posted October 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 "...and deal damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the number of cards discarded x500." You spelled ancient wrong.Lame name.meh pic.Thank you ' date='i fixed it.[img']http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/5392/131423tt2.jpg [/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wolfblood Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 good ow that it got fixed 6.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 "...and deal damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the number of cards discarded x500." You spelled ancient wrong.Lame name.meh pic.Thank you ' date='i fixed it.[img']http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/5392/131423tt2.jpg [/img] Me again...let's see... If I were you, I'd call it:Rex - the Released Rampage Something like that... But, good luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monem Posted October 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 "...and deal damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the number of cards discarded x500." You spelled ancient wrong.Lame name.meh pic.Thank you ' date='i fixed it.[img']http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/5392/131423tt2.jpg [/img] Me again...let's see... If I were you, I'd call it:Rex - the Released Rampage Something like that... But, good luck! I'd like the name . thanx again ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DesCrow Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 I personally would change "opponent controls"to either just their monsters, spell/trap, or hand.other than thatName-1/1Pic-1/1Originality-1.5/2Balance-2/3Usefulness-2.5/3Total-8/10(if you wouldn't mind would you check my set in my sig) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 Not bad though I've been seeing that pic around quite a bit.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monem Posted October 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 Not bad though I've been seeing that pic around quite a bit.8/10Thanks for raiting ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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