Huntar! Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 lol at the title right? But yeah, this is what happens when I haven't made cards in weeks. >.> Thanks to Wolfy for making the most epic pics ever. The guy is absolutely amazing.. I have always hated very long effects, so if you say my effects are too short, Im going to send you hate-pms. FYI, long effects aren't realistic. If I cant read your text, your card isn't realistic. Here are the cradz. [yes, I spelled it that way for fun] If you want me to post the text, you are blind, or need glasses, because the print is very, very readable. [align=center]Archaic Traveler, the Clown Sunight [/align] Wolfy owns the art, I just edited it. If bloody changed the rules on me, and I am missing something, please tell me. Enjoy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 Just a minor point, the 1st card's name - I would (you can ignore this all together if you want) either remove the comma from the name, making Archaic Traveler like an Archtype (like Elemental Hero is), or have it as 'Kappa the Clown, Archaic Traveler'. But that's not really imortant. OCG:1st Card - I don't think 'Each turn' is necessary due to you mentioning a Phase to activate the effect, and the last line (this is treated as an attack...) I thinks should be in brackets.2nd Card - I need you to explain what you mean by "During the turn that this card would be Special Summoned", since it's effects can only be activated after it has been summoned not while it is summoned. Pics are good (surprise, surprise... coming from wolf and all), and just naming the 2nd card "Sunlight" is different from how cards are named these days so that's good too. Effects are balanced and effective. Card Ratings: 8/10, 8/10Couple Rating: 8/10 P.S. I don't think it makes a card unrealistic if the effect is long and becomes unreadable without posting it outside the card, since it's not our fault how the card maker is programmed to react (not complaining about the programming of the card maker or anything, since I couldn't do a better job at it). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted October 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 thanks for the input. Thats deeply appreciated. And I would go ahead and make more Archaic Travelers, but I have enough projects already lol. Its not "Sunlight" its "Sunight". Because, "Sunknight" and "Sun Knight" looked bad. Thanks again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frlf Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 1st card.OCG: 1.7/2 Almost perfect.Pic: .5/1 The edit is crappeh.Effect: .9/1 Name: 1/1 Kool.Attribute/Type: .5/1 Dark type plox.Originality: .8/1 It is original. But not THAT much.Playability: .6/1 Would give it Limited.Balance: .6/1 Op'ed.P.I: .7/1Total = 7.3/10 2nd cardOCG: 1.7/2 Again, almost perfectPic: .8/1 That one is better :DEffect: .7/1Name: .6/1 Could have more?Attribute/Type: .7/1 Would give it spellcaster, but fairy fits it too.Originality: .6/1 =/. Playability: .5/1 Limited.Balance: .6/1 More OP'edP.I: .5/1 This one is worse.. =/.Total = 6.7/10 Well, you've been away for some time.Still, good job Hunter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bunter Dwayne Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 I love both cards! But the first has a named shared by many mosters eg. Greenkappanic epics specially LOVE sunlight thatll go well with anything :)nice workfirst card 7/10 (I liked the idea)second card 10/10 (me love) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:|Fallen|:. Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 Yeah Hunter, you rock! Teach some of these n00bz something with your incredible awesomeness8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Card maker snobben Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 Pics 10/10 awesomeEffect 9.1/10 preety awesomeName 10/10 awesomeStar 5/10 sunight should be level 5-6 stars. Total 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 Well, the grammar/ocg is painfull, and the effects are a lil underwhelming. Though, for not making cards in a while, they are allright ^_^ 6.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 Well' date=' the grammar/ocg is painfull, and the effects are a lil underwhelming. Though, for not making cards in a while, they are allright ^_^ 6.7/10[/quote'] lol Not everyone can word tricky effects well...But I am gonna q4t this post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 Well' date=' the grammar/ocg is painfull, and the effects are a lil underwhelming. Though, for not making cards in a while, they are allright ^_^ 6.7/10[/quote'] lol Not everyone can word tricky effects well...But I am gonna q4t this post.Well, thats true, however, the wording of some of these are way off...Hunter should know how to word most of those... BTW, 7000!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 I'm not blind, I'm just lazy...effects outside pl0x? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted October 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2008 Yanks, I apologize for my general stupidity. Thanks everyone, I think Im just gonna give up on cardmaking for a while. I kinda suck.. so yeah.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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