Cowboy Dan Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 Sorry about the one with no pic. My computer was having problems. [/img] Image credit: www.photobucket.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 OCG: While you control another Warrior-Type monster, this card cannot be attacked. < How I would write it. Pic is nice, but could be better suited for a Spell Card based around Warriors attacking (just an opinion) and this is the first Holo that I've seen that doesn't look out of place. Effect is basic, simplistic and unfortunetely unoriginal. Card Rating: 6/10 - OCG is an issue, and it's unoriginality makes it a problem. A poor addition to a poor Archtype really Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted October 7, 2008 Report Share Posted October 7, 2008 This would be correct OCG actually: This card cannot be selected as an attack target if there is another Warrior-Type monster on your field.______________________________________________________________________ I agree in that the pic could be better.7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted October 7, 2008 Report Share Posted October 7, 2008 This would be correct OCG actually: This card cannot be selected as an attack target if there is another Warrior-Type monster on your field. I took the OCG from "Solar Flare Dragon" and just edited it for Warrior-Type rather than Pyro-Type, so I thought mine would work. But his looks better than mine if I'm honest, so go with his. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lolimar Posted October 7, 2008 Report Share Posted October 7, 2008 For OCG look at DeMeNTeD's suggestion or StevenBray's suggestion (I'm pretty sure they're both correct). Pic is nice (Great Holo!) and idea is good. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CardTimeNow Posted October 7, 2008 Report Share Posted October 7, 2008 The wording is wrong as someone else mentioned. The picture is decent. Overall, 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted October 7, 2008 Report Share Posted October 7, 2008 Change ATK to 1700, DEF to 1600. Good pic and effect. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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