New Card Maker 1st card

[Pidgeon]

[/font]Well this is sort of my first card so if i did read the rules right the credit to this picture goes to this link http://www.kazuya-akimoto.com/2006/2006images/IMG_5822_howling.jpg

 

and as for the card here it is

 

I was kind of thinking along the lines of a lower class dreadroute for the dark monsters but not like the confusing dark eraser.

[CardTimeNow]

Picture: 5/10

OCG: 4/10

Name: 3/10

Type: 0/10

Effect: 6/10

 

Total: 18/50

[OMGAKITTY]

You have some minor OCG issues (capitalization)

Summoned

Special Summon

Level

DARK (it's an attribute, not a type)

Graveyard

Life Points

can (not may)

It could probably be reworded better

"When this card is Summoned successfully, you can pay half your Life Points to Special Summon as many Level 6 DARK monsters from your Graveyard as possible."

 

12 stars isn't very realistic....

Name isn't very good either.

I personally don't like the pic.

Don't make up fake types

But at least you read the rules and posted your card correctly. That's a +1 rep from me.

 

It's not a terrible start. I suggest going and reading the OCG thread for more help on OCG.

[Zack Blaze]

Thats just bad 0/100

[wolfblood]

Bad sorry dude 0/10

[Catman25]

Hey, it's not so bad, it's their first card, don't give them 0's/10. It's a bit overpowered, 5/10, nice try.

[Pidgeon]

Oh sorry also if some of you said the error there is no link to the picture before here it is

http://media.filmschoolrejects.com/images/cloverfieldmonsterart01.jpg

Here is a New 1 tell me if im just supposed to keep all of my pictures in one post 2 guys k

 

 

aaa yes and as kitty posted and the response helped much more then statistics I am very experienced with the ocg but im trying this as a effect like geminis I have been playing yugioh and all forms of games for 6 years at least I enjoy them very much but regardless the info was well appreciated I did notice my gramatical errors and realized that the way I had made the Dark monster was not very effective also you are very right the type dark does not exist a error that occured in my writing was that it is actually supposed to be all level 6 and up dark type monsters sorry about that mistake

[OMGAKITTY]

"If this card is Summoned successfully and you have 2 other DARK Beast-Type monsters in your control (on your field), you can select 1 of your opponent's monsters and switch it to your control."

the parenthesis are optional OCG you can use in place of what I put.

 

If you're going to make a subtype, you need spaces, like:

Beast / Secret Horror / Effect

 

I'd lower the DEF a bit...but it's a pretty decent card.

Aaaaah...but you forgot art credit! Right after I complemented you for remembering it! D:

[Pidgeon]

Here is a new 1 I made

this is the link http://images.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://www.wizards.com/dnd/images/MM35_gallery/MM35_PG9.jpg&imgrefurl=http://redwinggreen7.livejournal.com/95305.html%3Fthread%3D430153&h=481&w=400&sz=109&hl=en&start=375&um=1&usg=__WnL1iFngXlNqtbi-kixnnYdy2TA=&tbnid=aVhjmputF6yHwM:&tbnh=129&tbnw=107&prev=/images%3Fq%3DEvil%2BMonsters%26start%3D360%26ndsp%3D18%26um%3D1%26hl%3Den%26sa%3DN

 

[OMGAKITTY]

Alright. I think it has too much ATK for a 2 star, bump it to 3

Get rid of the border and signature in the pic

That's actually a really lame description...

it's a bird, so shouldn't it be Winged Beast?

And finally, most people here (me included) look down on vanilla (non effect/"normal") cards.

[Guest xbon]

2/10

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There are some ocg errors..... Like capatilization

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Picture can use some work.

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in total i'd give a 2/10... 12 star isn't that realistic...

[Professor Cobra]

Change level to 9, okay pic, Summoned, inlcude how, Level 6 or higher, should be or below, DARK, overpowered. 4/10

[wolfblood]

both 2 10/2 and please dont make them overpowered

[Pidgeon]

Okay here a nice card that can get powerful but with some very restrictive limitations notice I raised lv to 7 -_- lol critism may be good but it hurts but thanks anyways guys

and artwork credit goes here http://images.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://lautenbachillustrations.homestead.com/files/ninja.jpg&imgrefurl=http://forum.japantoday.com/viewtopic.php%3Ff%3D8%26t%3D176623%26view%3Dnext&h=640&w=640&sz=98&hl=en&start=335&usg=__0eGHKOr1esSiCyvRh4cwMCDZJqM=&tbnid=yPhNSgqSJRqrOM:&tbnh=137&tbnw=137&prev=/images%3Fq%3DNinja%2Bpainted%26start%3D324%26gbv%3D2%26ndsp%3D18%26hl%3Den%26sa%3DN

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Here is another 1 photo credit goes to this site

http://www.abstractdigitalartgallery.com/artgallery-psion005-abstract-digital-art-fractal-Psytrip.jpg

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Another Dark beast also about the attack values I am somewhat in a way intending on these being like gladiator beasts but unsearchable and yes I do know that gladiator beasts are somewhat cheap and broken but you canot search for these well yet.

 

 

 

[OMGAKITTY]

Still need to work on that OCG...

Ninja: Edit out the text on the pic.

OCG: When this card is equipped with "Fuhma (which isn't Japanese spelling, just fyi) Shuriken" and "Broken Bamboo Sword", increase it's ATK by 1300.

 

Right now, I'd say it's not a very good card. Before I can fully judge it, I'd have to see what the 2 equip cards do.

 

Reality Warp:

Alright pic

Should probably be a continuous rather than field

OCG: During each player's Main Phase, they can Special Summon 1 monster from their hand with "D.D." or "Different Dimension" in it's name.

[Pidgeon]

if i have my yugioh right fuhma shuriken can only be equip with a card with ninja in its name and increases attack by 700 and when destroyed deals 500 damage broken bamboo sword is +0 attack but if you use soul devouring bamboo sword which I do not remember the effects but they are good I believe its attack can potentially top 4000 with a lot of work.

[Yankee]

Umm, the ocg on these cards fail, and some of the effects are just not good. Try to work on these...

[.Digital.Simplicity.]

These cards are aweful work on them.

[Pidgeon]

say what you will gentleman the fact that (this is sealing my own fate but regardless) no one has had any bone to pick with the picture is good enough for me.

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heres a new 1 now :D

 

yes I know there was some ocg and capitalization errors but I was rushed

aaa yes and

http://images.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://princesse33.free.fr/dragon%2520ice.jpg&imgrefurl=http://dornedain.blogspot.com/2006/11/im-dragon-out-of-fire-i-need-my-fire.html&h=768&w=1024&sz=406&hl=en&start=26&usg=__FF99m3iNeMk0m8BuNEL9xQbrdE4=&tbnid=Y8kUPCnqqVH2TM:&tbnh=113&tbnw=150&prev=/images%3Fq%3Dlight%2Bdragon%26start%3D18%26gbv%3D2%26ndsp%3D18%26hl%3Den%26sa%3DN

[finalflamedragon]

Good pic. I'd say a little overpowered(my opinion), but good anyway. 8.5/10

[wolfblood]

all of those are overpowered dude.......2/10

[gustavosuarez]

good card. some errors but nothing bad. 7/10

[Pidgeon]

Heres a new 1 I made

http://images.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://urody.in.ua/gri/gal/albums/userpics/10001/normal_wolf-demon.jpg&imgrefurl=http://www.imvu.com/groups/group/Demon%252BKnights/&h=400&w=400&sz=24&hl=en&start=7&usg=__QYYxGs_IXMRVMiilBY2aOowBljU=&tbnid=9KJDZV2WIqXJ9M:&tbnh=124&tbnw=124&prev=/images%3Fq%3DDemon%26gbv%3D2%26hl%3Den

 

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And heres another 1

http://dougbot.com/forum/africanDemon.jpg

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Here is a third one this one is a rather intresting idea.

http://media.bigoo.ws/content/halloween/gif_demons/halloween_demons_166.jpg

[Angus0403]

-12/12

bad

[Captain246]

I like it and um i think you can make up your own types cause when the real makers madem

they had to make up a new types each type they introduced a card so 100% on creativiness and keep it up.