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[align=center]New card made for a contest

Card is made to support "Last Turn" (Obvioulsy)

I haven't made a card since June so my OCG is really rusty.

Contest Edition and Diamo-nd001 is correct. I don't care what you say.

Please, no OCG corrections. It's made for a contest. Help from everyone else is cheating to me (Any corrections responds as a sea of white)

Credit to Wolfy for the pic.

 

 

 

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This card can only be activated when your opponent has summoned a monster with an ATK more than the ATK of the monster on your side of the field due to the effect of "Last Turn". Toss a coin. If the result is heads, roll a 6 sided die. If the result is an even number, you can select 1 of the effects to activate. -You can pay half your Life Points to negate the effect of "Last Turn" and remove all Special Summoned monsters on the field from play and the duel continues as normal. -Toss a coin. If the result is heads, roll a six sided die. If the result is an odd number, you can Tribute 1 monster that was Special Summoned to your side of the field to Summon 1 "Fear Token"(Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 10/ATK 3100/3000). This token is substituted as the monster Special Summoned to your side of the field due to the effect of "Last Turn".

 

 

If I have forgotten something, please tell me

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Awesome pic but the effect is WAY too long. Next time tone it down bit. Overall' date=' 7/10

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I'm sorry.

I feel so ashamed that I made a complicated card.

>.< Try thinking a bit next time.

I wasn't going to try to win a contest with cards like:

When this card is destroyed, you can do some crap with a sucky card and be happy.

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I like the card, the effect is interesting and the picture is cool.

 

-There are some OCG/grammar errors though:

 

life points = Life points

summoned = Summoned

tribute = Tribute

one = 1

 

I am also not sure if everything is worded right but I can't really help with that.

 

pretty good,

 

8.5/10

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I like the card' date=' the effect is interesting and the picture is cool.

 

-There are some OCG/grammar errors though:

 

life points = Life points

summoned = Summoned

tribute = Tribute

one = 1

 

I am also not sure if everything is worded right but I can't really help with that.

 

pretty good,

 

8.5/10

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Tankee

 

But you don't read much do you?

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Well..i dont exactly understand what a card would need to win a contest "effect wise"

but i think this effect is TOO long and almost pointless..i love the name and pic is fine but just think about that: who EVER uses last turn and how often?? why would u make a card that would take their excitment away!! also if last turn is so rare think about countering last turn! at least make it and instant win card not gamblin insanity! i think that it lacks usefullness

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I like the card' date=' the effect is interesting and the picture is cool.

 

-There are some OCG/grammar errors though:

 

life points = Life points

summoned = Summoned

tribute = Tribute

one = 1

 

I am also not sure if everything is worded right but I can't really help with that.

 

pretty good,

 

8.5/10

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Tankee

 

But you don't read much do you?

 

Oh I am very sorry, I passed right over that part. Forget about that part of my post,

 

new rate = 9/10

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Well..i dont exactly understand what a card would need to win a contest "effect wise"

but i think this effect is TOO long and almost pointless..i love the name and pic is fine but just think about that: who EVER uses last turn and how often?? why would u make a card that would take their excitment away!! also if last turn is so rare think about countering last turn! at least make it and instant win card not gamblin insanity! i think that it lacks usefullness

 

Contest isn't judged very highly on playablility (I suggest you learn the word. Usefullness sounds mean.)

2. Makes a player think. If he quits, he still has to duel. If he gambles, he has a high chance of winning

3. Last Turn is one of my favorite cards >.>

4. It really doesn't matter how often the card made to support is used. Seriously.

5. How would you rate a card that says "You win the Duel"?

6. You seem like a very intelligent 1 star. Please learn grammar and you'll become a very good card maker ^_^

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Wow, very nice, and complicated effect. Sadly, the grammar/OCG has alot of rough spots. :(

But, this is a very nice, well thought out effect. Though, from what I understand, Last Turn is banned =/

Anyway, very good job, flip a coin, and IF thats right, you get to roll a dice. If thats good, then you get somthing. Thats great man. Very, VERY hard to get your way, but with it's effects against "last turn", it can be a killer. Good card for a card to save yourself ;)

 

Though, for a card with this effect and perpose, the name doesn't really fit to me..but good job

 

7.8/10 ^_^

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Wow' date=' very nice, and complicated effect. Sadly, the grammar/OCG has alot of rough spots. :(

But, this is a very nice, well thought out effect. Though, from what I understand, Last Turn is banned =/

Anyway, very good job, flip a coin, and IF thats right, you get to roll a dice. If thats good, then you get somthing. Thats great man. Very, VERY hard to get your way, but with it's effects against "last turn", it can be a killer. Good card for a card to save yourself ;)

 

Though, for a card with this effect and perpose, the name doesn't really fit to me..but good job

 

7.8/10 ^_^

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Thanks

Like I said, I haven't made a card since June and my OCG is quite rough.

The name, and I hate explaining things-I'm really bad at it, means:

Reccuring-Repeating Over and Over and Over Fear-Oh noez, I'm scared.

Effect-Heavy gambling is scary, you have to think about it; if you get it right, yayz if you get 1 flip or roll wrong, your screwed.

 

Last Turn is banned? lol, I don't really keep up with the banned list.

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^ Yeah, last turn is banned.

Also, i understand the card, but, if your monster has less atk than the opponent's with last turn, it's really nothing to think about. You would use this card ^_^

 

For not making cards sense june, this is good. Make more soon!

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^ Yeah' date=' last turn is banned.

Also, i understand the card, but, if your monster has less atk than the opponent's with last turn, it's really nothing to think about. You would use this card ^_^

 

For not making cards sense june, this is good. Make more soon!

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Aiyi, captian

As soon as I get some pics.

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Np' date=' hope you get more rates on this ;)

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Actually, I think we killed it with our exchange of spammy posts.

But one of the funnest things about spam is that it bumps a thread, much like I'm doing now, and nobody really cares.

 

It is really is the best way to bump? Isn't it? At least your card is good, otherwise, this would be really dumb xD

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Np' date=' hope you get more rates on this ;)

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Actually, I think we killed it with our exchange of spammy posts.

But one of the funnest things about spam is that it bumps a thread, much like I'm doing now, and nobody really cares.

 

It is really is the best way to bump? Isn't it? At least your card is good, otherwise, this would be really dumb xD

 

 

This way you don't have to wait 24 hours.

Loopholes ;)

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Np' date=' hope you get more rates on this ;)

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Actually, I think we killed it with our exchange of spammy posts.

But one of the funnest things about spam is that it bumps a thread, much like I'm doing now, and nobody really cares.

 

It is really is the best way to bump? Isn't it? At least your card is good, otherwise, this would be really dumb xD

 

 

This way you don't have to wait 24 hours.

Loopholes ;)

We just pwnd ycm ;)

Conversations are not allowed, but as long as I comment on your card...xD

No seriocly, good work, but, you really need to practice ocg and all.

BTW, why havent you made cards in so long? 0_o

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Np' date=' hope you get more rates on this ;)

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Actually, I think we killed it with our exchange of spammy posts.

But one of the funnest things about spam is that it bumps a thread, much like I'm doing now, and nobody really cares.

 

It is really is the best way to bump? Isn't it? At least your card is good, otherwise, this would be really dumb xD

 

 

This way you don't have to wait 24 hours.

Loopholes ;)

We just pwnd ycm ;)

Conversations are not allowed, but as long as I comment on your card...xD

No seriocly, good work, but, you really need to practice ocg and all.

BTW, why havent you made cards in so long? 0_o

 

True, and if I'm answering your questions....

 

You know the idea spark that automaticly goes of in your mind when you want to make a card?

Mine went out.

Plus, since the server-change, I've been having a lot of trouble uploading pics to mah cards.

 

To make this one, I pasted the card over the original pic on paint, that's why the figure is so good.

 

And inferno,

 

6+2+5=13 XD

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I wasn't going to comment, since the card is for my contest, but I found a flaw that you may want to fix before the contest deadline tomorrow. Last Turn has this sentence in it's effect: "Select 1 monster on your side of the field and send all other cards on the field and in their respective owner's hands to their respective Graveyards." The bold part is what I'm touching on. Your card hinges on activating after your opponent summons a more powerful monster, but by the time they got around to summoning anything, this card would already be destroyed and gone by the effect of Last Turn.

 

Just thought I'd give you a heads up ;)

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