marionetteofshadow Posted October 7, 2008 Report Share Posted October 7, 2008 [/font]My Sweet, Sick, Signature YuGiOh card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Stoner-™ Posted October 7, 2008 Report Share Posted October 7, 2008 Try using Just Close the Spaces Below: Ratings:Pic - 4/10.Effect - 6/10.Card - 7.5/10.Total - 17.5/30. There are some OCG Errors like you capitalized "Selected" when it should be "selected", with a lower case s. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marionetteofshadow Posted October 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2008 Thnx for your Help and Kindness. I'll change that seleted thing soon. so Overall do you think it is "OK". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted October 7, 2008 Report Share Posted October 7, 2008 Think of his rating as a mark in school. 30x3.3= about 10017.5x30= 57.75or 57.75% Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted October 7, 2008 Report Share Posted October 7, 2008 Not bad, but do look over the OCG/grammar thread. You have alot of words capatalized that don't need to be. -The picture is alright. -You said the same effect twice, and it should be "...gains 1000 ATK (during damage calculation only)..." 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted October 8, 2008 Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 The pic is just Giratina, but Nice, I like the effect, it's like Skyscraper. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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