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Save cyber laser dragon!!


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..hmm...CYber laser dragon is cool! however its a crap CRAP CRAAAAP card when it comes to profesional yugioh..so i thought of some cards that would probably create a reason for cyber laser dragon to exist in a cyber deck and epsecially after the 1 cyber dragon limitation! (konami suX)

 

First post btw plz be kind :D

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SirBig providing the cards again...

 

Anyway, here are some OCG errors:

 

dark = DARK

machine type = Machine-Type

in = on (you/your opponent's side of the field)

deck = Deck

grave = Graveyard

life points = Life Points

 

Also don't abriviate...

 

dmg = damage

u = you

 

-The pictures are ok, but could be better, and the effects are decent.

 

7/10

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These are allright.

Just try to use img codes next time. Click on your created card in the card maker, and copy the link that appears below it. And paste that link on a thread. Thats your img code for your card ^_^

 

Anyway, not bad, but the grammar/ocg REALLY needs to be worked on, along with some balances. Good effort. I hope to see more soon ^_^

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