-Stoner-™ Posted October 8, 2008 Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 I haven't made a Realistic Card in awhile, so I thought i'd give it a try again...Hope you like it. [Spoiler=Card] [img]http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/5408/129931vm5.jpg[/img] [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Effect] Depending on how this card is Summoned, activate 1 of the following effects: -Special Summoned: Decrease the ATK of this card by 350 and add 3 "Tree Counters" to this card. When this card has 5 "Tree Counters" on it, increase the ATK of this card back to the original ATK. -Normal Summoned: Special Summon 1 EARTH monster from your hand to the field. Halve the ATK of the EARTH monster for 3 turns. -Flip Summoned: Draw 3 cards randomly from your Deck, then destroy 1 card in your control. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Image Credit] Artist - [URL=http://ironshod.deviantart.com/]Ironshod[/URL] Link - http://ironshod.deviantart.com/art/Oak-dragon-33316896 [/Spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted October 8, 2008 Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 Not bad, the OCG need some work, but you did a good job on capatalization and stuff. The effect is pretty good, and it is fairly balanced. The picture is overused though. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Stoner-™ Posted October 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 Not bad' date=' the OCG need some work, but you did a good job on capatalization and stuff. The effect is pretty good, and it is fairly balanced. The picture is overused though. 7/10[/quote']I know my OCG needs work, I need some help or something in it, I suck at it...The pic is overused I know, also could you vote in the poll? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted October 8, 2008 Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 No problem, just voted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted October 8, 2008 Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 Nice card. Pic=5/5 Effect=6/6 Name=1/2 Total=12/13 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Stoner-™ Posted October 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 Nice card. Pic=5/5 Effect=6/6 Name=1/2 Total=12/13Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted October 8, 2008 Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 no prob^_^,you should stay in Realistic cards,you've got some serious potential Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Stoner-™ Posted October 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 Depends on what everyone else thinks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted October 8, 2008 Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 I think the Special Summon and Normal Summon effects should be flipped...Otherwise you're getting 2 monsters right off which could then be tributed for a stronger monster. Yeah...you have some weird OCG here...Maybe I'll come back later when I'm not feeling as lazy and fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted October 8, 2008 Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 The grammar/ocg is off, and the pic is overused...I used that pic before...The effect is allright I guess...Good try, but it needs alot of work... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Stoner-™ Posted October 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 I think the Special Summon and Normal Summon effects should be flipped...Otherwise you're getting 2 monsters right off which could then be tributed for a stronger monster. Yeah...you have some weird OCG here...Maybe I'll come back later when I'm not feeling as lazy and fix it.Changed the Summons around and yeah i know, i suck at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted October 8, 2008 Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 Nah. You're ok. Almost there...you have all the capitalization and stuff down...you just need to get a feel for how things are worded. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Stoner-™ Posted October 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 Nah. You're ok. Almost there...you have all the capitalization and stuff down...you just need to get a feel for how things are worded.I know...If someone would be willing to teach me i'd pay them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted October 8, 2008 Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 At this point...I'm not sure it's something that can be taught. You just have to look at a lot of cards and kind of get a feel for how things are worded.Oh. and to fix your OCG:Depending on how this card is Summoned, activate 1 of the following effects:-Special Summoned: Decrease the ATK of this card by 350 and add 3 "Tree Counters" to this card. When this card has 5 "Tree Counters" on it, increase the ATK of this card back to the original ATK.-Normal Summoned: Special Summon 1 EARTH monster from your hand to the field. Halve the ATK of the EARTH monster for 3 turns.-Flip Summoned: Draw 3 cards randomly from your Deck, then destroy 1 card in your control. I'd lower the flip summon draw to maybe 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Stoner-™ Posted October 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 Fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustavosuarez Posted October 8, 2008 Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 good card. the effect is interesting. the pic is also overused but its ok. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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