Infernalhero Posted October 8, 2008 Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 Ok,I made this to be an a pain to your opponent. [spoiler=Lore]"Arcadian Warrior + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters"When this card is Synchro Summoned Succesfully,you and your opponent shuffle each card in their Hand into the respective Deck. At the End Phase of your turn,you can pay 1500 Life Points to destroy every card on the Field(excluding this card). For each of the cards destroyed your opponent can draw 1 card from their Deck.During your Standby Phase,if your Life Points are below 1500 and you have less cards in your Hand then your opponent's Hand,this card gains 500 ATK points for every card. When this card is destroyed you must draw 10 cards from your Deck. I haven't made a card for a while my other posts have died so I was hoping I could pick it up.I'm still learning OCG so any corrections are welcome.Thanx^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Stoner-™ Posted October 8, 2008 Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 Pretty Decent Card, Ratings Below: Arcadia,Hell DragonPic – 6/10.Effect – 8/10.Card – 8.5/10.Total – 22.5/30. Im not gonna say anything about the OCG, since i'm still learning to get better at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted October 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 Thanx for the rating,I worked hard on the OCG so I hope it's good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted October 8, 2008 Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 Couple OCG fixes: Field = field Turn = turn Card = card There are a couple things worded wrong too. As for the rest of the card, the picture is overused and the effect is interesting, I don't how playable it would be though. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted October 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 I hate to say it,but I've never seen this pic,but thax anyway^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted October 8, 2008 Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 It's ok, the grammar/ocg needs some work, and the pic just sucks...But it's a really good effort ;)Good job ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted October 8, 2008 Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 Pic-No Press that wide key in the middle of the keybored after you end a sentence.Don't cap "Card", in that sentence, what cards?Last sentence, take out You can and add a comma Bla blah blah blah, draw 10 cards from your Deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted October 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 Zeroshot can you please expand on what you said,I'll change the pic look it over bt the entire roll of this card is to get your opponent an infinit amount of cards in their Hand so you can strike a winning blow,or just dedeck em.I also don't like pressing the space bar after each sentence's end.It makes it to long and when he's destroyed he forces his own effect on you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted October 8, 2008 Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 If it's not optional, say must, not 'not optional' And please use spaces. It's a pain to read otherwise. And at this point, squeezing the text with spaces won't make a difference. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted October 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 Alright I'll try to use spaces between sents. next time.I'll also fixed the must part of the sentence.Thanx.Updated the card,plz post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jovi Siagian Posted October 8, 2008 Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 It's just me or the card's frame colour is for Effect Monster, not Synchro? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted October 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 You must have saw the first repost. I fixed it. It's a Synchro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted October 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 Bump(1)New Card Added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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