Shadow182 Posted October 8, 2008 Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 Hi im form Germany. My English is not so good but i try to write right. ^^I hope somebody can German, because the Cards are wirtten in german. Here my 3 Cards for a Dragon Deck: Bahamut - King of the Awaking Dragon's 1 receiver + 1 or more DRAGON a non-receiver monster When this card is on the field, only dragons can specialsummon . Once per you can specialsummon a monster of type Dragon of your hand, Graveyard or deck, every dragon by this effect is summon, cannot attack in this Turn. If these card should be destroyed, you can offer a dragon on your side as a tribute to negate this. Burning Wings of Dragon Choose a dragon on your field side, this remain in by number of the stars, from any effects of magic, traps or monsters untouched, exept of the effect from \ " blazing wings of the dragon \ ". The activation of this card cannot become anuliert. If this card lies in the Graveyard, you can discard 2 hand card to add them to your hand. Eye of the blustering dragon According to number of the dragon's monsters on your field side the following effects activate themselves: 1 - your opponent must show you the card he in his Draw phase draw. 2 - your opponent must always point you which cards he draw. 3 - you can see the hand of your Oppenent. 4 - your opponent must play with open hand and field. 5 - Choosing of a card of your Oppenent on the field or in the hand and take them on your hand. please rate when you can. @edit: Puhh i hope i have translate right. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexander² Posted October 8, 2008 Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 I Personally can not read German, although i will rate what i can... Wait? Is it just me? or did you post the same card twice? Nvr mind... Pics are cool, im usually in Graphics and stuff, im rarely in cards, but i love the pics... Another thing is that the the symbols (like the ä and stuff) isn't showing up in the cards, because the system doesn't read anything but the letters, numbers, and a few hyphons and commas here and there... Can't really Rate/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow182 Posted October 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 I Personally can not read German' date=' although i will rate what i can... Wait? Is it just me? or did you post the same card twice? Nvr mind... Pics are cool, im usually in Graphics and stuff, im rarely in cards, but i love the pics... Another thing is that the the symbols (like the ä and stuff) isn't showing up in the cards, because the system doesn't read anything but the letters, numbers, and a few hyphons and commas here and there... Can't really Rate/10[/quote'] Ok, i try to translate the cards. Give me a little time! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexander² Posted October 8, 2008 Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 Its cool though, i like them... although i cant read them! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow182 Posted October 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 I have Translated the Cards. I hope.^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexander² Posted October 8, 2008 Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 The OCG is off quite a bit, but, you did translate and you said you didn't know much english so look at like Icyblue's or Yankeefan's, or even Kale's to get an idea of what the card grammer is like on the english yugioh cards. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow182 Posted October 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 The OCG is off quite a bit' date=' but, you did translate and you said you didn't know much english so look at like Icyblue's or Yankeefan's, or even Kale's to get an idea of what the card grammer is like on the english yugioh cards. :)[/quote'] Ok, i accept this advice. And thx. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted October 8, 2008 Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 The OCG is off quite a bit' date=' but, you did translate and you said you didn't know much english so look at like Icyblue's or [b']Yankeefan's[/b], or even Kale's to get an idea of what the card grammer is like on the english yugioh cards. :)Woot! I am still loved xD Anyway, work on the grammar/ocg, and try not to make the writing of the name of a syncro monster silver, as it makes it impossible to read.Also, the effects need work too..Remember to never make cards in german here. Nobody really knows it, or wants to read german to understand the effects here...I do look forward to seeing you imrpove though ^_^ Good luck to you in the future ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow182 Posted October 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 Here a new Dragon from me! Tibarus ruler of all dragons This card cannot be set or normalsummon, this card cannot become specialsummon, only while you offer 3 dragons with the attributes fire, water and darkness as a tribute. As long as this card on the field is, all dragons on your side are immune before all card effects of your opponent. You have to do every round a dragon from the graveyard removes if you do not do this, this card is destroyed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustavosuarez Posted October 10, 2008 Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 i cant read german but the cards are interesting. i cant rate, but i put you a 7/10 for the effort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kazuki01 Posted October 10, 2008 Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 Nice pics dude... but i cant read German too.... XD i give it 8/10 ^___^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted October 10, 2008 Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 Hey i can read a little bit of german (since i live in denmark close to the german border) and the cards are quite good. I couldnt read all of it but what i could understand was taht i give you 7/10 for the cards and 8/10 for the effort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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