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Excluding they are basically a copy of the allies' date=' only against them...

6.5/10

 

Try to do something totally oringinal next time.

 

Wonder what Kale is going to say...

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basically what i am going to say, only summed up in a much smaller space. you got your wish, my friend.

 

First off, ever hear of the "Card Concept Thread"? This is a thread devoted to ideas of the members of this forum, and i added this concept to it. I allowed members to use this idea on one condition: they ask. As you did not do that, i am not very impressed from the get go.

 

Secondly, your only concept is ... let me see ... mine.

 

You have two "Rules", the first being all of my rules, and the second being that they card is red. Awesome.

 

I must point out the creativity in the Enemy Monster, as it is opposite of Ally...

 

Now, that we have discovered that you have used my concept illegally, for lack of a better term, and that you barely did anything to change it to your own sort of concept, i must say i am furthermore unimpressed.

 

Thirdly, you dont know how to write and design the cards. If this would be a proper card, you would write it like this:

 

"When this card is Normal Summoned to Vector 1 of 1 Stack you control, remove from play Vector 2 of this card's Stack to remove 1 Ally Monster from play."

 

however, you didnt write that, you wrote it a different way. i am not as concerned about this "Ally Only" OCG but rather you said "remove the card below this one" and didnt add "from play." as such i am even further unimpressed.

 

fourth, not to be rude but, your recolours arent that good. Not very many people's are, but you seem to be getting there. Just a few things you could do to make it better... But as it doesnt look very professional, i am not very impressed.

 

Fifth, lets go to your concept, or lack thereof. Your entire point to this "set" is to just go against mine, is that correct? That is explained in your effect, remove 1 Ally Monster from play. i am not as concerned about someone not liking my monster concept, but the fact that you picked mine to make a concept against mine was just ludicrous. It would be like me making a set that stopped Lightsworn Monster effects, and that was it. There is virtually no splashability to it. The fact that the Allies could potentially be put into any deck and make them, hopefully, better makes them somewhat a good concept. This concept isnt.

 

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I can barely read this >>

 

tis true. you can barely read this card at all. at least i posted the effects of the monster below it' date=' so that even if you couldnt read it, which was from the effect being too big, not the recolour might i add, you could still know what the card did.

 

Now for the card itself. It is a 2000 ATK Monster that has one effect that activates most likely once in a duel, that is, if your opponent has Ally Monsters on the field. That makes him underpowered to the Graveyard and back.

 

This set doesnt impress me at all. The one thing that didnt impress me the most was that you refused to ask to borrow my concept. The fact that you made a mockery of my concept without asking to do so even further makes me unimpressed.

 

 

Try to do something totally oringinal next time.

 

As in the words of the Reputation 0 member Bix, try something original. He has that idea down, try do remember that too.

 

For future cards in this set, should you choose to continue, i would ask that you get my permission first. granted that most likely will not happen, not to be rude. You didnt give much of a first impression on the set to make me think otherwise.

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