muj Posted August 21, 2007 Report Share Posted August 21, 2007 I registered yesterday and have been on for a couple of hours. I made a few monsters and one spell card. This is my first trap card and i was wondering what you peopl think of it. Please rate it and I accept all criticisms. Please suggest what i need to improve. p.s I made it from the top of my head and from scratch. Beautiful Venality Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alordzynix Posted August 21, 2007 Report Share Posted August 21, 2007 Nice Cardd 8/10 but I tink the payement can be a little higher Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muj Posted August 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2007 Thnx :) Ye i should change it to around 500 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alordzynix Posted August 21, 2007 Report Share Posted August 21, 2007 And infected at the monster that are already on the field because if it is you should higer it up to 1000 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilrow Posted August 21, 2007 Report Share Posted August 21, 2007 You also need to at which phase the life points are payed E.g. standby phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joseph_downe Posted August 21, 2007 Report Share Posted August 21, 2007 pretty goodi agree, higher cost and specify when the points are paidalso the effect doesn't need the line "But are not destroyed"8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muj Posted August 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2007 better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted August 21, 2007 Report Share Posted August 21, 2007 BAD OCG. REAL BAD. It should be: When a monster is summoned with an ATK less then 1500 Points, destroy the monster. Reduce the ATK and DEF of all monsters on the field with 500 Points. Pay 900 Life Points every Standby Phase. If you cannot, destroy this card. Also, I'm glad you are uploading you cards;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted August 21, 2007 Report Share Posted August 21, 2007 Thats wrong OldMaster... Reduce the ATK and DEF of all monsters on the field with 500 Points? Here: Reduce the ATK and DEF of all monsters on the field by 500. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God of Cadillacs Posted August 21, 2007 Report Share Posted August 21, 2007 Cool. I like that picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muj Posted August 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2007 lol thnx you guys, i changed the description. is this better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serrenox Posted August 21, 2007 Report Share Posted August 21, 2007 Really good for the first trap card... 9/10 Where did you get the picture? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Speedguitar07 Posted August 21, 2007 Report Share Posted August 21, 2007 BAD OCG. REAL BAD. It should be: When a monster is summoned with an ATK less then 1500 Points' date=' destroy the monster. Reduce the ATK and DEF of all monsters on the field with 500 Points. Pay 900 Life Points every Standby Phase. If you cannot, destroy this card. Also, I'm glad you are uploading you cards;)[/quote'] yeah i agree with deity. That really doesnt make much better sense. I dont get your signature either, its low when u right something like that? Im sorry I just dont get it. To me it should at least be "its wrong" instead of "its low" cuz when I think of that it sounds like he insulted you which is obviously not the case. I think that card is really cool though besides the way you put things like everyone says. Id use a card like that in my deck if i played yu gi oh. I give it a 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the worm Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 Overpowered, try raising the cost to 400 or 500 damage per turn and I'll raise my rating from 6/10 to 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 reminds me of the anime Crush virus, but at least it applies to both sides. I'll give it a 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chiappettaj Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 It's is a balanced and possible better than balanced card like it a lot. Keep it comingChange it to 500 life points. more reasonable Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
assanaut Posted February 7, 2009 Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 Grammar errors, and not much appeal. 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tabris Posted February 7, 2009 Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 Overpowered - King Tiger Wanghu without the limitations that make it quite difficult to build a deck around with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas476 Posted February 7, 2009 Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 Please rate my cards. Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeroukoo Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 Good for a first card. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amethyst Phoenix Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 I think this thread got necro'ed 2 times >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
al9090 Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 BAD OCG. REAL BAD. It should be: When a monster is summoned with an ATK less then 1500 Points' date=' destroy the monster. Reduce the ATK and DEF of all monsters on the field with 500 Points. Pay 900 Life Points every Standby Phase. If you cannot, destroy this card. Also, I'm glad you are uploading you cards;)[/quote']yeah 7.3/10 like the pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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