Bengal Posted October 10, 2008 Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 This is another card this is to be included in my "Spirit of Rebirth" set. Reborn Dragon Please comment and rate! (Art credit on the card) As requested, cards needed to summon: [spoiler= Blue Sage - Gaurdia of the Rebirth]http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/2524/114689kq2.jpg' alt='114689kq2.jpg'> [spoiler= White Sage - Herald of the Rebirth] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted October 10, 2008 Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 It's good but it seems as though the ATK's to low,and due to that lowering effect you should maybe raise it to a 3000 or 3200.I like it and the idea,do you have a thread for the card's needed for it's summon,cause if you do you should post em here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted October 10, 2008 Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 It's a bit difficult to Summon...I agree w/ infernalhero in up-ing the ATK a smidge.I like the idea, it's pretty cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted October 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 Thanks, I will up the ATK and post the two cards needed to summon it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K.B. strategist Posted October 10, 2008 Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 Another excellent card from you. The pic looks a little more like a butterfly then a Dragon... but that's my opinion. Only error I found: are instead of is level may also require a cap. 9.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted October 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 Thanks for the fixes K.B., and I do think level is capatalized. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted October 10, 2008 Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 Level is definitely capped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted October 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 Thought so, I remember Zeroshot mentioning that in one of my previous cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted October 10, 2008 Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 You know I just have to say this,u should try to make this into a fan-fic if you're not already doing this.I mean these cards sound like cards that could actually exist in the game.Good Luck with the set or cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted October 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 I have'nt thought of making this into a fan-fic, I will continue to make the set and a fan-fic could be a possibility. Thank you for the suggestion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pitchblack64 Posted October 10, 2008 Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 nice pic and good effect i like it 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Digital.Simplicity. Posted October 10, 2008 Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 Pretty cool cad i love the pic 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted October 10, 2008 Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 interesting effect,as usual this card is great is another sucses! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted October 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 Thanks, and to Mech King, I'm glad you like the picture, I was a little concerned because I went so heavy on the saturation and and contrast. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted October 10, 2008 Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 Change 100 to 300, level to 9, good pic and effect. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted October 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2008 Thanks Cobra, not sure I want to make it a level 9 though. (bump) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted October 11, 2008 Report Share Posted October 11, 2008 well...... just that it cant special summon it self with its own effect..the first effect makes sure of that...maybe change the first effect to:"cannot be special summon except by [requirements] and its own effect."but still some ocg errors................ umm...... 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonisanoob Posted October 11, 2008 Report Share Posted October 11, 2008 thst is the single most unusable underpowerd card on this site ive seen soo far Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted October 11, 2008 Report Share Posted October 11, 2008 Meh, 7.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted October 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2008 Thanka phantasy, I've changed it so it can special summon itself, and I have decrease the LP payment to special summon the LIGHT monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted October 11, 2008 Report Share Posted October 11, 2008 no probhelp anytime just one more thingif the card would of been destroythat means it already enter the damage stepso then you cant negate the attack cause its already been attackedmaybe you should say "not destroy"............ dunno....... just my suggestion... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaca Posted October 11, 2008 Report Share Posted October 11, 2008 I like it but the pic could be better. The effect is ok.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted October 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2008 Ok phantasy, I've changed it again to say what you suggested. Thanks again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted October 11, 2008 Report Share Posted October 11, 2008 well.......reducing the damage to 0 still destroys your monsterjust that you take no battle damageill edit it for you (in bold): This card cannot be Normal Summon or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 1 face-up "Blue Sage - Gaurdia of the Rebirth" and 1 face-up "White Sage - Herald of the Rebirth" you control, and by its' own effect. During each of your Stanby Phases, you can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower LIGHT monster from your hand or Deck. If this card would be destroyed by battle, you can remove from play 1 monster that was Special Summoned by this card's effect to have this card not destroyed. This card loses 100 ATK and DEF for each of your removed from play monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Liger Zero Posted October 11, 2008 Report Share Posted October 11, 2008 Nice 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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