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Valkyria of the Raging Winds (used to be my Celebration card )


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[align=center][font=Times New Roman]I posted this card to celebrate the 1000th post I reached during this week and the fact that I’ve been on the forum for a bit more than 6 months now. I still enjoy the site as much as before, so expect to see me around quite a lot.;)
Thanks to everyone who contributes to the community with his/her respect and friendliness. A special mention goes to ender4449 for having accompagnied me on my way.:D


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[spoiler=Card Lore]
If there are less than 10 cards in your Graveyard, this card is destroyed. This card can only attack a monster with a higher Level and/or ATK. During your Battle Phase, you can activate 1 of the following effects:
-If the attacked monster has a higher Level than this card, switch the Levels of both cards. This card gains 400 ATK and DEF for every higher Level it reaches.
-If the attacked monster has a higher ATK than this card, switch the ATK and DEF of this card until the end of this turn.
-If the attacked monster has a higher Level and ATK than this card, remove it from play and inflict 1000 damage to your opponent's Life Points.
At the end of the turn that 1 of this card's effects is activated, this card and all the cards you control with a lower Level than this card are destroyed. If all the destroyed cards are WIND monsters, inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the number of monsters you control which are destroyed by this effect x 500.[/spoiler]


Credit goes to: http://krimsonblood.deviantart.com/art/Pepper-Valkyrie-77103482.


[u][b]Preview card to an upcoming set[/b][/u]
[url=http://www.myimg.de][img]http://img18.myimg.de/NecrolytetheDamnedDupl69f08.jpg[/img][/url]

Credit goes to: http://eqlipse.deviantart.com/art/Wraith-002-3270381.[/font][/align]
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First of all congratulations on 1000 posts.

 

As for the card, I like it.

 

-The picture is great, and the effect is a little confusing, I had to read it a couple times to get it.

 

-The OCG/grammar seems ok, just one grammar error I saw come up,

 

one = 1

 

Nice work though.

 

8.5/10

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[align=center]I was invited here because I was informed of a sexy party. Now I see it.

 

I would like to first, congrats you on beating the 1000 post score.

 

This is one of the many cards I would like to criticize on because of the maker's elegancy.

At the start, This is a list card. Also known as a multiple effect card or a selective card. It will be hard to balance only if you haven't subtracted anything from the effect itself. The majority of this card is talking about switching and gaining ATK or/& defense points. That's not of a bad choice to be using. I rather like most of it. I won't comment on the picture because it's not important. I see some Original Card Grammar errors but to be honest they are not major. It's also quite balanced. Good try bud. And congratulations again.

 

My rating will be judged on

Originality - 78.68% <-----------> 7.8/10

Co-ordination on the enemy - 93.65% <---------> 9.6/10

Intelligence of use - (depending on the user, which is you so I won't doubt it) 96.99% <-----------> 9.8/10

Overall - <--------------------------> 7.99 <---> 8.12/10 - underpowerness = 0.35/10. Will Result a 7.77/10

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I think it's overpowered.

 

It should be a Level 4 monster instead of being a Level 6 monster.

 

7/10

 

That would make it more overpowered.

 

At the end=During the End Phase

Also, when reading through it, it doesn't sound OCGish. I can't exactly point it out but really.

Pic looks squished.

 

7/10

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O.O

 

This is on height with the best i have ever seen.

 

The effect is good, although i think it's last effect should damage its owner, as to make it more balanced. I love the pic, but it's a little blurry, and i can see a signature in the bottom right corner. I will not however let that damage your rating.

 

P.

 

Hundreds of billions of congratulations from me for getting your 5th star!

 

^_^

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