Vampire Assassin

[Lil Jevans]

Most of my cards are rather strong so from now on I'm going to make cards that have good effects but aren't overpowered.

I got this pic from images.quizilla.com

Please rate and tell me what you think and tell me if you want me to make a vampire set.

 

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When this card is Normal Summoned, destroy 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field. If this card is destroyed by a card effect, Special Summon it on your side of the field in face-up Attack Position during the End Phase it was destroyed by discarding one DARK-Type monster from your hand.

 

This card has been edited thanks to the advice of 'OMGAKITTY' and 'mefist377.' Thanks guys!

[OMGAKITTY]

one = 1

"...destroyed by a monster effect, Special Summon it to your field in Face-Up Attack Position during the End Phase of the turn it was destroyed."

 

Crop out the words at the bottom of the pic.

Pretty good, 8/10

[Mister Sir]

Op'ed.

 

Have a neg or something, ex:

This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 1 DARK Zombie-Type monster in your Graveyard from play. When this card is Special Summoned by this effect, destroy 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field. If this card is destroyed by a card effect that targets it, Special Summon this card during the End Phase.

[Lil Jevans]

Thanks for the advice guys. I'll edit it a bit.

[Corinthian]

Once you edit the pic, it'll be good. Right now you get a 7/10. Just need to edit the pic.

[Professor Cobra]

Should be: face-up, good pic and effect. 8/10