bronynoob Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 hey i just finished sum cards dat i think are pretty good tak a look and rate. images by wolfberserker you like?oh crap i put up insectoid twice sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sammidysam Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 Just fix the Elemental Hero Insectroid thingy. And, your monsters had no capital letters in their name so their names looked really bad plus you forgot to capitalize anything you were supposed to. FAIL/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ancientspellcaster Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 Good cards,bad OCG i would suggest fixing itThe 4th card needs improvements. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 Check out Dj Osiris's thread for help.Fusion Listings are like this:Elemental Hero Avian+Elemental Hero BubblemanOr whatever the cards are.Monster Names are CapitalizedDon't Just put E Hero you have to Say Elemental Hero whenever you right it on a card.Too many simple effectsFor Now 0/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blazenz Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 need so major improvement but thats okay keep trying 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Sir Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 Please capitalize. Pics are good for e-heros, and work on OCG.Because of the pic quality, 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∮.Ғσяgσттeи.SσℓÐιєя.∮ Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 tons of stuff wrong FAIL/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Sir Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 ... When you're not specific, that doesn't really help the person you're giving "advice" to, is it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bronynoob Posted October 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 thx for all the help ill fix it soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corinthian Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 OCG needs fixing but pics are good. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:^) Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 Oh yes, better use of the pictures >.> These are horrible... 0/10 Really think you're so great, well you aren't. Seriously. They were my first cards... So don't go bad mouthing me when you're worse than me and you think you're so great... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SebastiaanZ Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 Pictures are awesome, names are good, OCG is horrible. I think everything`s said. 1/10 (for the pictures) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DestinyLord Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 Some major OCG errors, and i dont really like some effects.Cards like ''Elemental Sharp Neos'' are to difficult to summon, and have an too weak effect for the requirements for summoning they have now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bronynoob Posted October 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 allright i fixed the ocg so now ill make sharp neos easier to summon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 i just have to say that i really want to see the revised versions of these, and will hold my comments until then, though it will be EXTREMELY hard to do so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bronynoob Posted October 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 okay here they are sharp neos was being a butthole but here he is finally wtf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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