When life gives you lemons...

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Mods, if this breaks any rules, lock it please. This is just a poem I wrote.

 

When life gives you lemons, where do they go?

They go down the drain, never to be shown.

When life gives you lemons, what do you do?

You overlook them, just like the morning dew.

When life gives you lemons, how do you feel?

You feel as though nothing has happened in here.

When life gives you lemons, what should you say?

Most people say nothing, toss them out of the way.

When life gives you lemons, how does it taste?

It tastes like nothing special, it has gone to a waste.

When life gives you lemons, what happens then?

You look at it and say, "We all remember when..."

 

Please finish off the last sentence in the poem. It does not have to ryhme, just end the poem.

[Yogg-Saron]

They get squeezed.....word....yo

[「tea.leaf」]

"... When we let opportunity pass us by."

 

Fits the poem, no?

[Dark]

"... When we let opportunity pass us by."

 

Fits the poem' date=' no?

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I must assume you are really good at writing poems, because that was the same exact thought I was thinking when I wrote this. That was pure, and fit the poem 100% perfectly! Bravo!

[Guest Tiger]

"We all remeber when..."

 

"...we got the lemons :D"

[∮.Ғσяgσттeи.SσℓÐιєя.∮]

pretty good.ive done better,but i never will post a poem onto this site. :)

[Brushfire]

pretty good.ive done better' date='but i never will post a poem onto this site. :)

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If you've done better; prove it.

Empty comment is empty.

I apologise for going off-topic.

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When life gives you lemons, where do they go?

They go down the drain, never to be shown.

When life gives you lemons, what do you do?

You overlook them, just like the morning dew.

When life gives you lemons, how do you feel?

You feel as though nothing has happened in here.

When life gives you lemons, what should you say?

Most people say nothing, toss them out of the way.

When life gives you lemons, how does it taste?

It tastes like nothing special, it has gone to a waste.

When life gives you lemons, what happens then?

You look at it and say, "We all remember when we let those lemons leave us waiting."

 

That was the actual end for my poem. It does not ryhme. I wrote this poem because I was feeling sad about this girl in my school [the new girl] who did not have any friends. I became her first friend, and she is so nice, and sweet. And now, she has so many friends, and everyone loves her. So I decided to write uno poem.

[「tea.leaf」]

"... When we let opportunity pass us by."

 

Fits the poem' date=' no?

[/quote']

 

I must assume you are really good at writing poems, because that was the same exact thought I was thinking when I wrote this. That was pure, and fit the poem 100% perfectly! Bravo!

 

A winner is me. :3

[ITI3L33]

That is good but as Pyro Knight said, prove that you can do better.

[Jericho]

When life gives me lemons, I make beef stew.

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I think I have heard enough, and I am ready to create a new poem. Please, no one else post, because I would like to lock this thread in peace.

[Guest]

~Locked as Requested~