.One.Of.My.Best..::Willed Forces::..

[Yogg-Saron]

[align=center]Enjoy and Comment. Image not owned by me.

 

Effect/Lore

This card's original ATK and DEF is equal to the number of Level 7 or higher monsters in your Graveyard when this card is Summoned x 800. When this card attacks your opponent cannot activate Trap Cards. Your opponent can only target 1 card on the field for the the effect of a Monster Card. If this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard your opponent cannot activate Spell Cards this turn. If this card is destroyed by battle, you must skip your next Draw Phase. When this card is Special Summoned from your hand you can return 1 monster on the field to the top of its owner's Deck. You can place this card in your Field Card Zone during your Main Phase. You can pay 1000 Life Points during each of your Standby Phases. If you do not this card is destroyed.[/align]

[Kale]

the effect seems... scattered.

 

maybe make a set of three that does collectively what this card does by itself? ^_^

 

but the card is cool nonetheless.

 

Rating: B-

 

~K

[Bengal]

Not bad, the part about the field spell card zone doesn't seem to fit though. The OCG/grammar seems ok, and it is fairly balanced aswell.

 

The picture could be better though.

 

Only 1 OCG errors I saw:

 

"as a result of battle" = "by battle"

 

8.5/10

[Yogg-Saron]

Scattered?

Well, tried to focus on 3 card effects, Monster, Spell, and Trap. Then I did a little LJM thing which gives it some umph. Did the destroyed by battle thing to help balance it. Also, the field spell card thing, it sort of helps an older set which I can't remember the name of for my life. The Life Point thing at the end is also for balancing.

 

EDIT: Fix'd Bengal, thanks.