Soul Bank Card- Feedback Please

[James Hitchen]

This is continuing my efforts to make unique card effects. I hope you like it!

 

[Kale]

remember that: "one" = "1"

 

I would like this effect better if it were:

 

"Once per turn, you can tribute 1 Monster to add 1 Soul Counter on this card. You can Remove a number of Soul Counters from this card to Summon 1 "Soul Token" ([add stats of the token here]) in Attack Position."

 

that would be cool, because then it would achieve the same purpose and add in a token effect. ;) as well as making the card seem better on the way that it is written.

 

you forgot your image credit though, you might want to post that link if you want this to remain unlocked...

 

rating: C-

 

~K

[Parting Shot]

You need to post a link or credit for the image used on your card. Please add such.

 

-Darth

[Professor Cobra]

Tribute 1 monster, okay pic, I understand it, yet, grammar problems. 6/10

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[Corinthian]

Okay pic, okay effect, okay OCG. "Okay" 7/10.

[bury the year]

remember that: "one" = "1"

 

I would like this effect better if it were:

 

"Once per turn' date=' you can tribute 1 Monster to add 1 Soul Counter on this card. You can Remove a number of Soul Counters from this card to Summon 1 "Soul Token" ([add stats of the token here']) in Attack Position."

 

that would be cool, because then it would achieve the same purpose and add in a token effect. ;) as well as making the card seem better on the way that it is written.

 

you forgot your image credit though, you might want to post that link if you want this to remain unlocked...

 

rating: C-

 

~K

 

NO.

 

Abusable, pointless. 'Nuff said.

I do prefer the original.

[James Hitchen]

remember that: "one" = "1"

 

I would like this effect better if it were:

 

"Once per turn' date=' you can tribute 1 Monster to add 1 Soul Counter on this card. You can Remove a number of Soul Counters from this card to Summon 1 "Soul Token" ([add stats of the token here']) in Attack Position."

 

that would be cool, because then it would achieve the same purpose and add in a token effect. ;) as well as making the card seem better on the way that it is written.

 

you forgot your image credit though, you might want to post that link if you want this to remain unlocked...

 

rating: C-

 

~K

 

Thanks for the feedback! I like your idea of Soul Tokens, and the OCG would be much better! I got the pic from a bbc website, it's a painting by louis parsons, who is not me, therefore I don't own the rights to it.