KurashiDragon Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 Well I eventually got bored of doing nothing but rating so I made another dragon. I remember gandora the dragon of destruction. The dragon that Yugi had used against Bakura and Atem, so I beasically went from there. 1 Tuner + 1 or more Non-Tuner Monsters When This monster is Summoned to the field destroy all monsters on the field (Excluding this monster). This monster cannot attack your opponent directly. During the End Phase of the turn this monster is summoned it is removed from play. If this monster is removed from play during the Standby Phase of your turn your opponent must send the strongest monster on their side of the field to the Graveyard. If there are no monsters on your opponent's side You and your opponent may special summon a monster with the most powerful ATK in their hand, graveyard or the removed zone. Image Origin: http://media.photobucket.com/image/black%20dragon/meaghanjustmovedin/dragons/BlackDragon.jpg?o=5 This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 3 Phoenix monsters you control with 2000 ATK or more. When this card is Summoned, remove from play 1 monster on the field. Once per turn during your Standby Phase, Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard with an ATK of 2000 or less.If the selected monster is used as a Tribute it is removed from play instead of being sent to the Graveyard. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned Exept by removing 3 Light Monster from your Graveyard, Removing one Light monster from your hand, and removing one light monster from the field. When your opponent declares an attack you may send one card from your hand to the graveyard to negate the attack. Once during your Main Phase 1 you may discard one card to Special Summon one monster from The graveyard to the field. (Ignoring the summoning conditions. Heavanly Swan is excluded from this condition.) That monster cannot attack on the turn it's summoned. If this effect was used Heavenly Swan cannot attack this turn. OCG: Medium I think I can do better so some comments would be good. Plz rate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 summoned = SummonedThis = thisend phase = End Phasestandby phase = Standby Phasecontroller of this card = yougraveyard= Graveyard Err....remember to capitalize.And I think you need to define 'most powerful' (ATK? DEF? Effect? Level?)Feels OP to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted October 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 K then I edited everything that you said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ancientspellcaster Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 Awesome Pics 1st Card is Awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted October 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 I now come with a new card know as Dark Warlord Phoenix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 i love the pics, but not the cards. they are good, but overpowered and a bit grammatically incorrect. i am the worlds biggest fan of balanced cards, and decent to good grammar no matter what the presentation. sorry :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted October 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 I suppose there are a few ways to over power however I don't really see how they would be considered op to an extreme. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 i hate long descriptions so im just gunna give it 7.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 Not great:?. I've seen better... I'd say more but just do what Omagakitty says and I wont need to. KK 5/10 also "powerfull" should be "highest" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 Oh Yeah well this is my best card!!!! (responding to the attached image) you need to stop being a perverted jerk in this forum. they WILL ban you without a second thought if you keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 Also it's spam but still a nice pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 Also it's spam but still a nice pic. too true Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 Synchro Summoned, good pic, Graveyard, highest ATK, can, not may, should be: Once per turn,. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 Oh Yeah well this is my best card!!!! Complete Spam and a violation against the rules. For that, I report your post. If the Moderators and/or Super Moderators ban you without hesitation, notice that there is nothing you can do. Anyways, I think the cards a somewhat good, even though everybody else gave the corrections, so no need for me to post the corrections. Grading:Pics: Good = 30% (3/3)OCG: Meh, not that great, but you can still keep trying = 25% (2.5/5)Originality: Dragons aren't really that Original these days, so I can't give you much for the Dragon, the Phoenix on the other hand is good = 10% (1/2) Grade: 65% (6.5/10) Note: You can still keep on trying to improve yourself. ~Enrise Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted October 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 True I really can't look that far without looking for a dragon. I don't make them so often anyways. I'm working on a new type card right now so check back when you can/if you want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted October 15, 2008 Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 I like how the second card has a 1 word difference from my name. XD Anyway, I'ma look at it srsly.OCG Fixorz: This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 3 Phoenix monsters you control with 2000 ATK or more. When this card is Summoned, remove from play 1 monster on the field. Once per turn during your Standby Phase, Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard with an ATK of 2000 or less.If the selected monster is used as a Tribute it is removed from play instead of being sent to the Graveyard. Set Ids are 4 letters before dash, and EN### after. Circulation should be left blank. Great card. =D Keep workin' at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted October 15, 2008 Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 I like how the second card has a 1 word difference from my name. XD Anyway' date=' I'ma look at it srsly.OCG Fixorz: This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster cannot be Special Summoned ex[b']c[/b]ept by Tributing 3 Phoenix monsters you control with 2000 ATK or more. When this card is Summoned, remove from play 1 monster on the field. Once per turn during your Standby Phase, Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard with an ATK of 2000 or less.If the selected monster is used as a Tribute it is removed from play instead of being sent to the Graveyard. Set Ids are 4 letters before dash, and EN### after. Circulation should be left blank. Great card. =D Keep workin' at it. i wish i could make out little mistakes like that. i am a good enough writer, but grammar stuff slips past me constantly when i'm making up cards. any pointers on how to remember the rules? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted October 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 Edited. Spank you very much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted October 15, 2008 Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 now this one i like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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