legendhiro Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 Please be honest... Image comes from:http://fc08.deviantart.com/fs23/f/2008/011/b/3/Of_Shape_and_Shadow_by_ShadowUmbre.jpg Image comes from:http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs22/i/2007/350/5/a/Holy_Lion_by_PearlEden.jpg Image comes from:http://www.strayreality.com/Lanis_Strayreality/Pics3/phoenix2azw.jpg Image comes from:http://www.annieb-art.co.uk/dancing-water-spirits.jpg This monster cannot be normal summoned or set. This monster can only be Special Summoned by sacrificing "Red Spirit Lupo", "White Spirit Leo", and "Golden Spirit Phoenix" and removing them from play. When this monster battles, return a monster in your removed from play pile to your deck. When this monster is destroyed, shuffle it into your deck at the End Phase of the turn. This monster cannot be targeted for your opponent's card effects. Image comes from:http://fc06.deviantart.com/fs6/i/2005/030/a/3/Quetzalcoatl_heaven_by_GENZOMAN.jpg Image comes from:http://a.bebo.com/app-image/6896748142/5411656627/PROFILE/i.yaquiz.com/img/q/u/08/04/04/IceDragon.jpg so after so long i have decided to update this with new support that was used with these cards in my fic. here it is! from here down all images come from photobucket. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 Make Red Spirit Lupo should be lv 7 not lv 6. White spirit Leo is to powerful as is divine spirit Dracon. I can't even see that Phoenix. You might wanna fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted October 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 yeah, something's up with the link to phoenix. refresh the page and it should show up, just until i can figure it out and repair it. and i see your point on the other two, but the point of Red's and White's effects is to let you summon out White using Red's effect. if i make him Lv 7 you get one more White onto the field. and i don't know what happened with white. he was supposed to be a 2200 ATK. i'll fix that now XD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 Sokay I don't get the last bit on the Pheonix it doesn't make sense. whight lions pic needs a back gorund and should probably have less attack. Red Spirit is good but it should be "Beast-type monster". Also there should be caoital letters all over these crads go look at some real cards with similar effects to get wise on how to write stuff properly. Overall 7/10 I like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted October 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 HA i think i fixed it XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brittle Ice Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 I like these cards,...That Phoenix card most!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted October 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 I like these cards' date='...That Phoenix card most!!![/quote'] thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted February 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 i added more cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted February 3, 2009 Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 I've used one of the images from your cards before, the White Spirit Leo; here's my version and he's very overpowered ^^: It was when I was a two-star, ^^" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chidori Posted February 3, 2009 Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 ^^Spam On topic: Great Cards. OCG could use a small amount of work though. All th pics are good exepct for th eloin one. I think its a little to plain. It needs a backround. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted February 3, 2009 Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 You have many OCG errors. Except that i like them so 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted February 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 bump. and anyone if you see ocg effors could you try to point them out and maybe give fixes. i'm terrible at ocg and have been pressed for time lately as it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 I'd say you did great for these cards: 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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