FindingTheEverlight Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 This is my first card in over 3 months, it's meteocre, but oh well. Also, please flame me for the OCG... lol EDIT: lol this is my 666th post! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 Take out "to the field". Change "on your opponent's side of the field" to "your opponent controls." Pic is a lil blurry and needs a set Id to be realistic. Other than that it's fine. G'job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BulletMan Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 OMG! thats your 666th post! run away! any ways, UPed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 its a little over powered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 Seems a little UNDERpowered for a high level (to me). Maybe if it didn't die at the End... Anyway, 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 Take out "to the field". Change "on your opponent's side of the field" to "your opponent controls." Pic is a lil blurry and needs a set Id to be realistic. Other than that it's fine. Also don't make it Ultimate Rare' date=' since that requires a gold shiny box at bottom right corner, keep it Secret rare (silver). Fine job, kinda UP'ed though, maybe increase ATK, dunno.[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FindingTheEverlight Posted October 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 Okey thanx for da feedback... lolz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cless Alvein Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 Take out "to the field". Change "on your opponent's side of the field" to "your opponent controls." Pic is a lil blurry and needs a set Id to be realistic. Other than that it's fine. Also don't make it Ultimate Rare' date=' since that requires a gold shiny box at bottom right corner, keep it Secret rare (silver). Fine job, kinda UP'ed though, maybe increase ATK, dunno.[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 i doubt this card will get the chance to activate its effect muchmaybe best with "A Rival Appears"dunno.......... 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Von Csent Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 It is not often that a card is under-powered. I suggest removing the self-destruct clause and bumping the ATK to the mid-2000's. On another note, how do you plan to special summon it? The condition is a bit situational. If you follow my advice, then make it that the effect activates if it is summoned by any means from anywhere. The effect is still offset by a double-tribute for 2400-ish ATK. At least you did not over-power it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 Change level to 4, DEF to 1600, good pic and effect. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Von Csent Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 Cobra has a good idea as well. If you go his route, still knock off the self-destruct effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chainsaw20x6 Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 not tremendously original, i think its UP, i say up the ATK keep the effect like it is 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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