Dragon Ball Series Cards ( Not Done Yet ) ( Goku Cards Done )

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[spoiler=Son Goku]

 

 

[spoiler=Vegeta]

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'm done with the Goku cards, so now I'm going to make the Vegeta Cards.

 

BTW for the people who don't watch Dragon Ball, the Kid Goku and the Son Goku ( Kid ) aren't the same thing, the Kid Goku is from Dragon Ball and the Son Goku Kid is from Dragon Ball GT.

 

If you can't read SS3 Kid Goku's effect:

[spoiler= Card Lore] This card can only be Summoned by removing from play 1 "Super Saiyan Son Goku ( Kid )" from your Graveyard. When this card is Summoned, you can select 1 face-up Defense Position monster your opponent controls. The selected monster is switched into Attack Position and its ATK is decreased by 1000 until your End Phase. When this card attacks the selected monster, this card is returned to your hand. When this card is returned into your hand, you can discard it to Special Summon 1 "Super Saiyan 4 Son Goku" from your Deck.

 

If there are other card lores you can't read, please tell me.

[Lord PidgeonStorm]

Very good!

You understand the way YGO cards should be made and use it well. They are well balanced, but would have been better if you would have to Tribute "Kid Goku" to Special Summon "Son Goku".

 

I would add the effect "When this card is destroyed as a result of a battle, pay X Life Points to Special Summon a card with the same as this card" to the "Saiyan" subclass or make a card called "Shenron" or "Purunga", which would be Ritual Summoned by "The Seven Dragon Balls" and give the effect to Summon the warriors from the deck to them. Maybe I will make it myself someday.

 

And I think Goku as such should have 2 or 3 different effects that would include:

-Raising ATK (In every great battle, Goku uses techniques to increase his power, should it be simple KI Level maximization, Kaioken or SSJ. This ability should definitely not be left out.)

-Returning opposing monsters to the hand/deck (Goku always tried not to kill the enemy, unless it is as evil and psychotic as lets say, Cell and Frieza.)

-Sacrificing himself (let us not forget how Raditz, Cell and Buu died)

 

Also, I understand you made SSj Goku lv5, but I think the LV isn't needed. There should simply be a "SSJ Goku", "Ascended SSJ Goku" (a.k.a. SSJ LV 2), "Goku SSJ 3" and if you are a GT fan, you might also want to add "Goku SSj4".

 

 

All in all, you put some hard work in the cards, I can sense it, wrote good effects in the way YGO cards should be written, and balanced them well.

9/10

 

 

Here are some of my, shall we say, more humorous DBZ cards: (not balanced or anything simply because of the funny pics and the commentaries)

[Kōsuke Ueki]

Nice! Keep up the good card-making work. You're doing really great.